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Trade

"An eye for an eye, and a tooth for a tooth" is exactly what you said.
Well, why not why you're at it, why don't you take my head?
You can have BOTH my eyes, and ALL my teeth, and arms and legs and feet.
Everything you wanted to, you could surely keep.
Take my hands, and both my ears, and fingers, toes apart.
You'll have everything you desire to have, but you'll never have my heart.


...that's a pretty good trade, right??

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Written January 21st, 2005

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  • xCrushOnYoux
    January 22, 2005
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    good job

    I really liked this poem. It caught my attention! good write!
    much <3
    Janelle