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untitled for now

Everyday
I wake up
do my thing
go to my boyfriends
go home
everyday

I try
to tell my self
that I am happy
I feel happy
at the time
but I am truly happy
when I am with you

he went away for Christmas
for two weeks
you decided
to come over
on New Years Eve

for three hours
we sat up talking
everyone else
asleep

my days are about to change
they're about to be
how I have I wanted
since April

my waiting so long is up
I got you back

God I LOVE how that sounds

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Written January 1st, 2005

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  • ghettogoodies13
    April 16, 2005
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    I really like your poem. thats hot!!!!
    ~Nikki~