Sitting here
constantly thinking about you
longing for you
I got a new guy in my life
but that doesn't stop me
from wanting you
he tells me
he wants me to be the one
that he wants to marry me
and I've been waiting so long
to tell you how I feel
for you to say it back
waiting so long
for your kiss
for your embrace
wanting to call you
tell you how I feel
but instead
go to his place
I make him mad
I make him jealous
when I talk about you
knowing that I still love you
he asks me
if I want you back
I lie and say "no
I have you"
even though
I've been
waiting so long
to tell you how I feel
for you to say it back
waiting so long
for your kiss
for your embrace
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Written January 2nd, 2005
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thank you for your comment and thanks for checking my poem out and your welcome
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Wow! There is a lot of emotion in this poem! i think its awesome! thanks for commenting me on mine too!
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yea it was hard..me and the one i love are together now and i broke up with the other...though he is in pretty bad shape from it since he's in love with me and everything but it was just infatuation for me and i really hope that he gets over me and everything turns out awesome for him.. thank you for your comment i really appreciate it!!!
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This is a peice that highlights true emotion from you. I whould hate to be in love with another when dating someone else, ahng on been there done that. It is aweful to feel for another when you are with soemone else and I think prehaps the only way is to stop being with the one you don't care for it is only hurting them and yourself. Good peice of work.
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thank you shinyrhiney for your comment...thats cool that you read this then!!!
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thank you darkangel for your comment!!
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this is exactly what i needed to read right now. this is exactly how i feel right now. its kind afunny that i read this, bc this is EXACTLY my mood!! great write, took the words right outta my mouth.
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this is awesome!I can COMPLETLY relate to this poem! I have gone through this so many times before!Keep up the awesome writing!
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thanks for commenting on mine and no problem
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Awesome Poem thanks for commenting on mine : )
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