get out of my head
get out of my bed
all of these thoughts
all of these memories
don't tell me
how it should be
this is how it is....
this is how it is
and I get so mad
when it hurts do bad
to remember
all the good times
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Written January 19th, 2005
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thank you Kim
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this is a really great write
xxxxx
Kim xxxxx
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Yes i say go for it!
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thank you ...I was trying to come up with more but the inspiration was gone and when i added it I actually thought hey this is good enough.. simple and to the point just like you said.
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I might actually sing this...not sure if I will or not... I have thought about it though.
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thanks for your comment and sure I'll comment on your poem
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yea I have thought about doing it as a song and I have tried to add a couple more verses but the inspiration was gone but it'll be back and I'll add to it
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very cool, simple and to the point. I likes -
Wooot! sing it that'd be a good song
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I like the pice I might change around these 2 lines to start it off with.........get out of my head
get out of my bed......love and light.....Blaze -
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This is cool. I like the simple rhyming, but under lies a deep emotion of betrayal and hate, rejection. Cool. Great job. I know I could be a little stupid, but can you please comment on my newest poem? It is called May It Never Fault. Please please please please. Thanks
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This reads almost like song lyrics... if you added another "verse". Have you thought about taking that approach?
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Fucking A babe, this can go any way. True, the only reason i know what it's about is cos you told me, but it can relate to anybody for any reason. Awesome work!
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