The glistening gleam of the waterfalls,
Sending geyesers of stream over mountain walls
Rainbows curving, away overhead
Awash with a dripping, watershed
Down below the splash and crash
Millions of droplets, in a forceful dash
A calvacade,of pouring streams
To reach the bottom by any means
Tumbling and rumbling in circular whirls,
As each wave comes crashing in repetitive swirls
Running away to join in the mass
Of turbulent river, spreading out to the grass
Racing over boulders, of shiny wet stones
First this one then that one trying to get home
Leaping in air,in ballets of spritz
Arching outward and downward, to watery hits
Slowing to calm, the wild racing heart
Playing out the last act,of its waterlogged part
Lapping up the banks, in foaming wet lace
With dreams of a leap, from a mountain's face
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Written September 10th, 2002
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How absolutely beautiful!! A definate 'wow'. Any source of water has always held a special place within me. This one really hit home. I love waterfalls!!!
~Alice -
don't touch it!
Susan you are sunshine on this waterfall filled in lace...
absolutely gorgeous are the portraits in words you paint -
don't touch it!
Wow! Fell for this one! Perfect!
RR -
Thanks Sis Gill~~~`
And you too Eddy it means so much to read your comments of praise
Blessings
Susan~~~ -
don't touch it!
Sis this is beautiful!!!!!! the words flowed like the fall itself...~~~~GILL~~~~~ -
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I feel wet now...I think your waterfall splashed me...hehe
Hugs...Eddy
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Thanks Casual Terry and Manicmuze
Your comments are so much appreciated!
Blessings
Susan~~~~ -
don't touch it!
Oh yES! This is stuffed with enchanting images and fantastic rhythm and meter. I adore this one :-) Really beautiful! -
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Feel the freefall regather and jump into a speeding river. Well done. -tj- -
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Oh this is so beautiful Blushfulmoon!!...I loved it every sentence was just lovely!...:*)
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