Swimming and splashing
But hidden away
Always searching
For new ways to play
Sailors have seen them
Fishermen too….
But they’re always to slow
To believe it’s true
They live in secret
Their beauty unknown
Always hiding
And always alone
They always dream
Of life on the land
Running and skipping
A very bold plan
But as always,
They’ll stay in the sea
To dream another day
Of a life with you
and me.
Author notes
hi, hope u enjoyed my poem, it was inspired by shiga's poem Faries! you should go and read it!
Written January 21st, 2005
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hehe! this was uper good! i really likd reading it and i hope you win the contest!! if it's still going on.. i dunno how to tell anymore, with the way people run things on here.. anyways!!
Really good job! i liked this alot and I can't wait to write more! hey.. your not working undercover for the mermaid people are you... jackie.. yo uanswer me!! before i.. well before i .. eat some of your pizza!! ya you heard me!! i said it!!
jess
*hand you a frog and a dish* make me some frog legs woman!! -
this poem is very effective, i really like the simple structure as it works very well. perhaps change the last line as it does not quite fit in with the rest, but otherwise excellent. good luck! rach x
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that was great it reminded me of arial lol stupid arial hiding all that stuff from us in the princess game! stickers! oh what a beautiful accesery for your princess model lol!! as much as i hated that annoying voice the game was so much fun lol! the ugly girl we made lmao! ah good times at jackies house! Cheat! lol you know what i just realized even though i was so stupid at that game i still won 3 times! how odd! great job again! love ya jackie!
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YAY!! I LOVED IT!! nice job Diane(
) Mermaids rock my effin socks haha yay! I'm gonna go now but greta job!
-April
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