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Novum

He said her voice was beautiful today.

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Option 6.
Written January 21st, 2005

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  • yukitosumi
    January 21, 2005
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    Very Nice...This can mean alot...the story I kind of picked up was either THE PHANTOM OF THE OPERA (because I just saw it Or a girl saying it, and the HE is a guy she likes, and the HER is a girl he likes.
    ANYWAYS...
    I don't know how to critique a poem like this. You've stumped me. I can't find anything bad to say about it, which has never happened...so HERE, and GOOD LUCK!
    Keep the ink flowing,
    Scarlet Eyes
    P.S: but then I'd have to consider the title, which I just noticed, NOVUM which is Latin for new...and it's neuter, so it would be new THING...or could just be in a different masculine case...okay, I'm done.
    VALE!
    Edited on Jan 21, 6:42 p.m. because ''.