In my dreams
He was mine
His touch so real
His kiss so soft.
In my dreams
I was his
Safe in his arms
His body next to mine.
In my dreams
We were together
My umber eyes
Gazing into his baby blues.
Until I was awoken
By the shrilling noise of my phone
And forced back into reality
Back into my loneliness.
A reality in which
He isn’t mine
His touch barely there
His kiss nonexistent.
A reality in which
I’m not his
His arms don’t protect me
His body belongs to another.
But I will wait patiently
For night to come
For his touch, kiss and body to come back to me
In my dreams.
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This isn't a personal poem, it's a PoetryFic, it's a fanfiction piece based off one of my favorite tv shows Law & Order: SVU, it's from one of the character's point of view, a friend challenged me to write it, and so i did. But even though it's fanfiction, i also believe it can apply to anyone. Anyway, hope you like.
Written January 10th, 2005
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5 Stars *****
wowowo.. tanya.. well.. you prove that you can win all those who dare to challenge you.. soo much very sorry to be soo muchlate to be reading this poem..
by the way.. i really liked this piece.. i too would like to curse the fone.. it happes to me too when i am dreaming of a wonderful angel.. then someone would wak me up or a thumping soud wud ruin the dream..
great write...
totally impressed...
thanks for sharing tanya..
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend........ just keep it up...... your humble little friend.......
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............ - vic ( who else?)
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Thanks for the comment.
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Very lovey-dovey. Still nice, though.
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Thanks so much for your comment. I'm really glad you liked it.
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How sweet. I like how you referred back to the 1st and 2nd stanza's in the 5th and 6th ones. It was really cool. Good write.
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