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I Surrender

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Take me sweet Jesus I surrender to you,
take hold of my body and soul,
I give unto you my love and passion,
I surrender  now make me feel whole.

Make the earth tremble beneath my feet,
let me feel your power deep inside,
bring your love into my heart,
Lord I now surrender, I will abide
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My eyes see Jesus blood upon the cross,
your son died for me I can feel His pain,
please take me Lord I surrender to you,
let me feel the passion once again.

You have pulled me away from Satan's fire,
I now will have eternal happiness with You,
I surrender everything I have to you Lord,
my love is faithful my love is so true.

So take all this passion I have for you,
let me feel your love surrounding me,
teach me Lord all there is to know,
I surrender my love and passion to Thee.
 


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Written January 20th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    January 22, 2005
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    Thank you so much for your wonderful and heartfelt comment. Isn't it so wonderful that we don't have to go it alone. God's presence is such a comfort. God bless you. Take care, Sandy

  • January 22, 2005
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    We’re ever learning to do his will Sandy, we’re never as wise to go it alone as we often do, and without realisation too. God Bless you for reminding us all what we need to more often. That’s look to the cross. God Bless

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 21, 2005
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    Thank you so much, I am so glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 21, 2005
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    Thank you Melanie. Have faith in God to see you through. He is with you and your mom. May God bless both of you. Love, Sandy

  • luckynsincere gold member
    January 21, 2005
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    I always enjoy these that you write!! It was great! You always inspire those who read!

    I would like for you to keep my mother in your prayers.. She was rushed in yesterday for an emergency surgery.. Oh, Sandy, she is not doing so well right now... My Grandfather always told me that prayer is stronger than any medicine of man. I have never felt so helpless... And I know I have let God hear my pleas for the pain to leave her... Thanks so much!
    Always,
    Melanie
  • daddys girl
    January 21, 2005
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    Wow a great Christian poem wich I loved reading. This was great

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 21, 2005
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    Thank you so much Michael for the lovely comment. I had been on the phone with poet (live4eternity) and he got me so passionate talking about Jesus I had to write it before I went to bed. He is so full of God's love, it's contagious. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 21, 2005
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    Thank you so much Colin. I had to write this before I went to bed last night. Jason had gotten me so passionate about Jesus Christ on the phone. His love for God inspired me to write this. Take care and God bless. Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 21, 2005
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    Thank you so much Tamara for the wonderful comment. I am so blessed by our Lord's love. My love for Him just grows more and more everyday. God bless you. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 21, 2005
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    Thank you Ann, for another lovely comment. This one came from my heart. I was on the phone with Jason for two hours last night and he had me feeling so passionate about God I had to write this before I went to bed. God bless you and take care. Sandy
  • Michael 54
    January 21, 2005
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    Outstanding

    This is one terrific strong statement of your consignment to God and His ways. I admire your convictions portrayed in this beautiful poem. Keep up the great writing, Sandy, and your great love for God. Take care and God Bless.

    Michael

  • Ladybug
    January 21, 2005
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    Sandy this is beautiful in your sweet soul crying out to the Lord to renew your passion for him and each and every day you shall pick up the cross and carry the grace he gave to you in knowing you are covered in his blood of forgiveness...

    Tamara

  • January 21, 2005
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    How absolutely lovely Sandy, your heart is so pure and beautiful with everyword, spoken truly from you heart! What peace, joy and comfort your words bring to me, my friend...your writings bring a light to my day as well as strenghen my faith. Lovely Sandy, and God Bless, Ann

  • ColinSJones
    January 20, 2005
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    wonderful sandy..this would have won our sinner's prayer contest
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