* Ring Ring *
That’s the phone
It’s for you
Can you hear me calling?
* Drip Drip *
That’s my blood
Always flowing
Can you see the trail?
* Murmur Murmur *
That’s my voice
reassuring
do you believe my lies?
* Scribble Scribble *
That’s my pen
writing thoughts
enjoy the tour of my mind?
Author notes
Written January 20th, 2005
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wow this is so unique and great together. keep on writing ~xex~ thanx for commenting on my piece
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i have never read a poem like this one in my life. it is kinf strange, yet i still loved it. if you keep on writing like this you will have so many people applauding and commenting on your work you wont have time to read them all. well, that is kind of exagerating, but still, this is a very deep peice.
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Wow, wow and double wow! I just am blown away by this. I really enjoyed this and I hope to see more like it! applauds!
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Sound of Silence is a good song. DK
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good
Yeap, I very much enjoyed my tour of your mind. Keep penning these kind of poems. -
this was really different, ive never read a poem quite like this one before. i liked it, keep up the good work!
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this is great. i like it. good job.
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This is excellent, you really gave a great tour of your mind. I like the format of this, made is very easy to read. Well done
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oO...i like this one very much...
i like the 3rd verse...but i also love the last one
interesting and inventive poem =]
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Woah, Awsome, never seen anything like this... Great write!
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Wow! I really like this! I've never read a poem in a format like this, and so I really enjoyed it. Nicely written, keep up the good work!
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