They fought and died together
They thought of home while bullets flew
They watched as friends were blown apart
They watched as lives slipped away
They left home as boys and came back men
They can't forget what they saw
They're haunted by the memories
They left the battle unwounded
They did not leave untouched
They are only humans like us
But the things they did made them heroes
They fought and died together
They only had each other
And now there bonded by a force no one can break
Because only they know what really happened
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which is better the word I have, untouched, or unscathed thoughts comments.
Written January 20th, 2005
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ab fab
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"But the things they did made them heroes
They fought and died together
They only had each other
And now there bonded by a force no one can break
Because only they know what really happened "
you really know how to capture the reader, well done, its not easy to keep my attention lol, well done, brilliant poem, be safe
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