I’ve seen you before in my dreams
You where standing between the crowds
Waiting for me
Smiling for me
We where in love
Holding a flower
A rose damped with blood
Your blood…I remember
Slowly losing control
Relaxing to eternity
It was a nightmare
You started crying
I ran for you…
You fell slowly
People were blocking the way
It was hard to breath
The place crowded
And it was even harder to reach you
The rose touched the ground
But you never left the rose
Your tears where shed
And there you where on the ground
And I’m not there next to you
It was real….
Now I remember…
The music
The people
The blood
The screaming
But you where calm
The murderer he didn’t even know you
Still I struggled to reach you
The rose I bought for you
Was still in your hand
You never let go
Your lips shivered
You’re trying to say something
But I’m not near….
I can’t hear
Stop!!! Not now!!! Just wait!!!
Please wait
I can almost hear you in my mind
Blood comes out…
Your body is shivering
You’re coughing
People surrounded you
I can’t see you
The people are not letting me come near…
I remember now how real it was
I finally reached you but it was too late…
You’ve said your last words
And I wasn’t there
Look at me one last time
…Your hands are cold…
And your look is cold…your staring at me yet I feel nothing
Author notes
i'm listining to alot of dark music latly....so thats what came up 
Written January 20th, 2005
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Oh my. This is a dark poem but I love it. I enjoy the dark feel and I guess the music you listed to inspired it. Keep listening. This is great.
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it was beautiful indeed my friend,,, amazing .. the concept and the form well written and said indeed ,,, btw it's smiling at me not for me...
i realy how u painted the scene so romantic and breath taking...
catch u laters,,, kisses
pascale -
awwwwww fadi that soooo unseting.
.... i like it lol well done
much love
big hug
~SARA~
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awwwwww. =[ this poem has so much emotion. good poem.
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