Do you see how I see?
I don’t think so
Do you understand me?
I highly doubt it
You don’t see why this is so hard
Seems easy to you, does it?
Not at all difficult in your regard
Why such a challenge for me?
Why cant I just wake up?
From this sleep of the senses
Why don’t I just get up?
And out of my self dug hole
To who am I even talking?
You don’t know, nor I
In circles, I am walking
No closer to the answer
Perhaps my path and line
will eventually divert
I might see why in good time
Until then, I wait.
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Dont ask, because I dont know.
Written January 20th, 2005
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this was pretty good, but i found one error that i beleive if corrected could make this poem sound and look better. the part where it says
"Why don't I just get up?
And out of my self dug hole"
You should put a hyphen in between 'self' and 'dug', so it says 'self-dug hole'
other than that, i see no problems. -
Going through everyday life seems like walking in a fog sometimes.
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I would say that I understand this a little but perhaps it is me who is confused.
Love -
i guess i shouldnt ask then
because i dont get it either...
again its like you're asking questions...and you're answering it all yourself...
nice write - "endless trails" is a good title...
Xxgina_
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