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update.

Ramblings,Gamblings,
Family gatherings.
Year older,
Simple samplings.

New visions are here.
The days are new.
Rich and rare.
Bright lights.

Fire warms.
like earth scorns.
skys are darker everyday.

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Written January 20th, 2005

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  • Orestes
    June 28, 2005
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    long time no talk man, its Anthony, I got a lot of poetry on here, and I just forgot that you were the one who turned me on to this site, so I figured Id show some love, you really should come back to suburbia hell.

  • michelle626
    January 20, 2005
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    this was a great poem. It was a bit confussing witch made is good, just a lot of meaning full words being put together witch made so much sence! great job!