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You

You’re all I’ve ever wanted...
I don’t ever wanna forget you.

...I LOVE YOU...

At first this feeling inside
was not so powerful.
You came closer and closer to me,
and this feeling attracted me.
I realized I couldn’t stay away.
I became so close to you,
that I just could not pull myself away.
Slowly,
you made me a part of you.

I’ll never forget the way you look at me
or the way you make me smile...
or the way you touch me
and hold me so close...
Everything seems so unreal
...with all of what you’ve given me,
and I’m happy that I had all of it.

I don’t ever wanna forget you...
or whatever we have.
The time is running out so fast,
that every moment I spend with you...
I just wanna make it last.
...I wish I could just stop time.

All the memories I have of you and me,
will never fade away...
I never want to lose you,
I wish you could always be by my side.

You’re all I’ve ever wanted...
I don’t ever wanna forget you.

...I LOVE YOU...

Author notes

Its not a sad poem ...lol well it kinda is...but then its kinda not [woohoo u guyz..lol ]!!!
Written January 19th, 2005

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  • Puppydog gold member
    April 25, 2005
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    A TRULY BEAUTIFUL POEM

    A truly beautiful poem my friend; this has touched my heart very much.


  • January 29, 2005
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    i was wonderin wether ur still ritin...and ya..u are ...really good sweety..bye

  • xOxO15
    January 24, 2005
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    hahaha mandy...dont owrry..i.m still normal


  • January 22, 2005
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    Hmm ya got a little sezy in there Maria, all the touching hmmm I hope you're staying the good girl you were when I left lol. Really great love poem though, always so angsty, but the sezy-ness in this makes up for it lol great poem!

  • xOxO15
    January 21, 2005
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    haha pervert...neelum lol i dont mean it that way...UR SUCHA DUMASS...read it poem way ..lol


  • neemuffin
    January 20, 2005
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    "i'll never forget the way you touch me"
    RAOWR! MARIA! WHAT ARE YOU THINKING ABOUT?!?! HAHA LOL
    freak, obviously.....yea, dis is nice, but i already told u that wen i read it in english....hmm i donno wat to say....wutever im bored, scrap me on orkut! byeeeeeeee

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