I want to run away with you
make love under the stars
Wake up by your side
every morning of every day
Show you what true love means
and trust and understanding
Smiles and laughter always
never sadness only tears of joy
Feel your arms around me
holding me close
Promises of forever
my Knight in Shining Armor
I want to run away with you
and make love under the stars
~Lady Raven~
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Written January 18th, 2005
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oh.... I just love this poem! I love the imagery of this poem......
Gothic Angel
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me too
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Don't we all...awww this makes me sad, it's a shame that we must live in reality, isn't it? lol...i loved it! Sorry i haven't been commenting on you more, i just get really busy...but i can tell you haven't lost your touch...Nicely Done Mom!
take care
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Well damn girl if I had a guy that looked like that I might never leave the stars
o.k on to the seriouse part lol. This was a really well written poem with alot of passion contained in the words. Awsome write hun. 
love and hugs
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X cellent!
Nothing better than running away and finding a quite spot underneath a canvas of twinkling stars! A very enjoyable read, simple yet inspiring! Love should always be like this, but of course it's not, lol...
~Kimberly~ -
Stunning!
wow this is sweet! And is that guy a doll or what? Beautiful imagery in this and the structure, tone and flow work like a well oiled machine. Brilliant job.
~Samantha
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impressive. i love it.
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Very nice write. I was wondering, is it written for a specific person? If it is, I hope you let them read it to show them how much you care. And if not, I hope you do find them soon. You're very blessed to have the gift of writing, keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of yours soon!
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This is beautiful and wonderful. It's meaningful and so poetic and romantic with a beautiful rythem. It's not pushed and forced out and it's wonderful. These words cannot describe what I want to say about your poem. Great Job
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Well the picture is quite interesting but I like this piece. Very nice! GOod job!
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That was so sweet! There is one impotant someon that I feel the same way about. This was truely beautiful. Keep up the good work.
Always and Forever,
~Kendal -
WOW!!!!!!!!
I love it! I love it! I love it! this such a purrfect poem to read in the middleof the night!
Keep on Writing!
I Wish i was talented as You .......But I guess the best I got from writing Vampire poes is my Vampire Trilogy ......
Kep on Writing!
Gothic Angel
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Awww thats sweet, I like it alot. It sounded like a stanza of lyrics from a song. Not any song I know just melodic. I'm not sure melodic is a word so I'll define it for you. Melodic=full of melody. There how was that? This poem is melodic, like that of a song. Better?
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Thanx hun. You're the first to comment, yayyyy. Hope all is well with ya kiddo!
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love ya baby
mmmmmmmmmmm pick the time and place
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