My work of inflicting pain and
suffering is known to many.
The count of souls I have taken
to the arms of death, has been plenty.
Have you heard about me?
I am the doctor, sent from the pits of hell
and your flesh and fear is my favorite smell.
The stench of your fear is what I love most.
"To screams of torture and pain!" is what I toast.
Oh how I want you,
My surgical blades are made for you and your skin
For that beautiful color of crimson
you have within.
Amputation of the limbs
my favorite choice of action.
Watching you cringe and struggle
brings me great satisfaction.
The sounds of your relentless screams turns me on
and excites me too.
I don't know whether to continue sawing,
or stop and make love to you.
Either way, I know that I am satisfied with the finish.
I wouldn't want that moment to waste,
disappear or diminish.
Do you see?
My dungeon of death displays so many beautiful things.
Jars of bloody organs and amputated fingers with rings.
Will you watch?
When I drink, dance and play in your blood?
As my razor sharp blade
creates the red flood.
Do you know me now? No?
Then Please, let me operate on your soft sexy pale skin.
It is the demon inside me that controls me within.
Cuts the flesh...
Shhhhhhh, your screams are fallen upon deaf ears.
Listen, can't you hear?
It's just us and your wasted tears of fear.
Now have you heard of me? Now can you tell?
That I am the doctor...
The doctor from hell !!
Author notes
Written January 18th, 2005
A contest entry
- Alone In The Dark by Night Terrors.
300 points, ended September 16, 2005, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show Me The Meaning of True Fear by SHadowHex666.
391 points, ended December 31, 2007, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Adult : Bleed With Me by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended January 15, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark Passions by DrkPoet.
450 points, ended April 8, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Eeeek!! That's one twisted tale that was definately a good read. I must bookmark this to check out some of your other stuff. Also the background totally fits with the imagery you've provided. Thanks for entering
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twisted... I like it alot.
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Truely sick and dark
this is oen hell of apoem that should instill fear into most poeple if they were to go through that kind of fucking shit. keep up the good work. Thanks for entering my contest. and good luck. -
my pleasure I want you too know that you placed I just don't know were yet too many poems lol
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Ty very much thenorth
I totally agree with you on the off rhyming and to look into it for editing.
I appreciate smart comments like these. I do invite the help, and sometimes another reader and mind, can give ideas or prferences of better writing!
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this is a good one. The rytheme is off in places but on the whole not bad why not try editting and reading it aloud. I love the detail and the topic good job
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thank you
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Great work I love it! thanx for entering!
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awww thank you for the bronze......the doctor can see his bloody reflection, and he likes!
once again thank you very much!!!!!
I really do appreciate that chickenFeTus666~Sara~!!!
The doctor will be back again.
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You got bronze in my contest, I loved this piece man. I was looking for poems that shows complete pleasure in killing with no type of revenge emotion to push a person to kill. you had no motive besides for kicks and I loved that about it.keep up the good work.
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lmao, I know what you mean
I guess then we are sick. LMAO
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Morbidly beautiful!! I really love this poem! Though, being as twisted as I am, I laughed at parts where I probably was suppose to cringe. haha. Great job!
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I am glad to see that this was on the featured... it was about time Doctor... You needed to get this exposed to a new level and freak these people out with this tale of hooror as only you can write! Meet you in the dungeon later!
S~
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Hey thank you pyro I am glad you liked it
Man its almsot scary to like something this sick, what have we've become?
Well its just a different style of writing thts all, Glad you enjoyed it and thank you very much for reading
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lol perfect drummer, ok I do have some, nice poems, lol but most of them is in a pool of these dark ones, I am glad you liked it though thank you for reading
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TY yuki, Very much
Ok the doctor will see you now
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thank you sweetgurl for your comment, um,...by the way this is just a poem not feelings, I want all to know that lol
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Thank you very much mystical gardenia
I really appreciate your time in reading this, even tho its sick, lol. But sickly entertaining.
TY!!!
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great
oh gosh,can't you find something else to drink when your thirsty...lol..ok so this is another great one of yours i do like it,and i really do like your imagination,great mind you have there..hope no one comes after it the way you been going at ones..lol.this is freaky lol.great job..ok so i read it again so now you know i liked it..lol
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Thank you death....lol, man I never thought i would ever thank death, that has a nice ring to it, but thank you so very much!!! really appreciated!!!
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Thank you angel of pure blood, Very cool name I like that. DArk and catchy!!!
Thank you for your comment very much!!!!
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SICK SICK SICK,I love it. Its beautiful.
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ahhhh poetry bear, you have avoided my jar displays of thy beautiful organs, not many get away,
Thank you for the cool and entertaining comment, I really liked that
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Thank you very much supergal for your comment!!!
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I know you..you looked at my colon and said I needed a resection when all I needed was a new diet and medication..bastard!!!! LOL I was smart enough to avoid you ha ha ha... my colon stays entact..your jar is empty.. but you are a good poet...
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Thank you very much for your comment sweet, it was sweet of you
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Its great and unique. Great write. WOnderful.
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Kinky. Recently in England we had a very interesting case of a Dr Harold Shipman who was convicted of having killed quite a lot of his elderly patients. Estimates vary, probably about 200, maybe 300, maybe more. He just injected them. Why not dedicate your poem to him?
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Dr. Giggles in a poem of pure flesh cutting extaveganza. I love it. It was awesome from the beginning to hell rotting end. Excellent job on this gruesome poem. Keep up the good work.
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Very freaky. I liked it, even though I usually don't like these types of poems. Good job though! I definitely wouldn't think of this topic...
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I am never going to the doctor again. This is so bone-chilling. It was wonderful! I'm always looking for a poem that will give me the shivers.
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Holy cow! this is very freaky! Very well written...it flows
so smoothly. You created a very erie(sp?) feeling and the background most certainly adds to it. God Bless and best wishes in the contest.
~ Katie
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Bravo excellent well done!
Excellent... bravo!!! Get it out there let the keyboard rattle don't stop you need to do sequals on this ... the horizons are limitless... the imagery is fantastic keep up the great works and love the background so appropriate magnifique... Wishing you much success in all of your endeavors
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WOW. That was so awesome. That was amazing. That was so... WOW. Dude.. haha I can't get over it. lol, this is great. It's sick in the awesome way. Kind of creepy as well. Great work. The title kind of reminded me of those doctors that cause pain instead of heal the people. But yeah, haha, This was awesome. I am loving the background. It totally fits in perfectly. Wonderful job once again.
Take Care,
Jasmine
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Wow this is realy good. This is so unique and different to other poems I have seen. The imagery is brilliant! I love it all! Great write and well done.
katy
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great
Wow, sickly amazing poem. In lines 7 and 8 you use fear twice, I would change one of them to something else. Keep up the awesome work. -
I LOVE IT!!!!! Totally awsomeness keep writing!
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bravo!Bravo!Bravo!
I love it!!! Its very creative and unique. I visualized scenes from various scary horror movies including Dr. Giggles!!! THis is wonderfully crafted. Keep up the great writing. The background is so fitting it made this much more enjoyable. -
Excellent imagry. Beautifully done. You definitly have the elements of fear and darkness working for the best in this piece. Probably one of the best and most interesting things I've read yet. Great write.
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Wow, definitely one of the most interesting subjects I have read on this site. The rhyming was very nice.. these two lines gave me a little shudder:
I am the doctor, sent from the pits of hell
and your flesh and fear is my favorite smell.
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OMG.. I'm going to have an operation soon... this's put me in a wrong frame of mind... though this reminds me of Dr Shipman....
Dr Shipman was convicted of killing 15 patients using injections of diamorphine, his killing spree lasted for some 24 years. An inquests decided that another 25 patients were unlawfully killed but there may be many more, Doctor Shipman recorded 297 more deaths at his practice in the northern English city of Manchester than other doctors working at a similar time in the same area. All this went undetected by the General Medical Council...
Good luck in the contest...
mina
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Very dark it freezes the blood that's left in the veins, well written and very evil, I think you have a very good chance of a nice shiny trophy to fill up with the blood of your next victim, I don't think I'll take that coffee with you after all. all the best, great write
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woah that is great , i try writing poems like that but i neve succeed you did a great job kewl. The background is awsome too , goes with the poem. I love it.
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Thank you, this is my favorite horror poem ever written. I am looking to doing another addition to the doctor, Thank you so much for your comment and I am very honored you enjoyed it
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Thank you very much LxSER,
I hope you got my comment to apocolypse, I thought that was very different than most writes I read and it was surely fresh so I was very pleased to read something new like that.
Thnx for leaving open some good choices or options to enter in this contest.
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That was a killer write. I love it. A dark demise for someone. Very killer. And the imagery.... Wow. I wish you the best of luck.
and keep writing.
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Wow.....gripped from the start that was brilliant. the phrase "trust me im a doctor" comes to mind hehe. Well done. good luck in the contest xxxx
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I'm in love with this poem..it has created what could be a full
movie plot that will definitely not fail to please..the rhyming
was absolutely perfect! the imagery was absolutely sick and
twisted..which is a very good thing and overall I'd be silly
not to say that this is one of the best poems I've ever
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WoW!!
Well well, I really love your style of writing immensely, it gave a chill up my spine. Almost like I came in contact with this "doctor from hell" Brought a somewhat smirk to my face as I read each line. Slowly wanting to know who this "doctor" was. Great, just magnecifant ending with " I am the doctor from hell" your writing is great, incrediable, all of the above. lol I praise you on this piece. yeah I don't know how to express it anyway else so yes. Good job and I shall look forward to every other future pieces you have...
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Iceangel twisted with some humor? oh my god your sick lol. I thought it was a bit disturbing. Ok maybe the doctor has some fun in the chaos, he might think it's funny, although he is sick. He loves it....ok ice angel you have an appointment....the doctor will see you now. thank you very much for the comment and applaud very much
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Thank you so much sarah, I am glad poetic horror can make someone feel warm and fuzzy inside as much as it does me thank you very much for the great comment much appreciated!!! oh sarah......? The doctor will see you now
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What up, Doc?
Ohhh...I love this! Twisted but with some humor there...I love it...I absolutely LOVE this line:
It is the demon inside me that controls me within.
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WHOA! This was amazing! It was creepy and gory and dark, it was just awesome! I love the diferent words you used to describe the blood and such! Good job, but please put in your author comments which poems you commented on. Good luck!
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Ok. Let's just stop the contest now because you have it won... hahahaha.. DUDE! This poem is sooooo friggin awesome. I totally LOVE the background and your write was so sadistic and evil that it actually made me laugh. (That's not normal.. is it? HAHAHAA) Good luck in the contest. I wish I had another applause, but I don't right now. Sowwy
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one scary poem
hey that was very good, I like your style in the way you have written it. a demented doctor who takes pleasure in killing, a very gruesome tale and a dark tale at that and in a poetic matter mind you. nice write immortalF you have given me a reason to turn on the lights at night when going to bed. -
SCARY AS HELL!!!
HOLY COW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS WAS DARK AND LIKE A HORROR MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS GOT UNDER MY SKIN FREAKED ME OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nooooo don't applaud till your hands dissapear you need them to write more poems!!! thank you somegirl for the great comment and for the applaud!!! I just hope it wins the contest. It would make me proud . I guess I'll find out friday. ty again somegirl, oh and the Doctor will see you now
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Attractive :S
H0w did this poem slip past me
This deserves all my fingers and my hands aswell, I wish i had a doctor like this! Call me crazy Ahh im amazed, again! -applauses till her hands dissapear-
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Hey I'm a guy, lmao. But still tho slap me 5 girlfriend!!! lmao. omg if I read anything like this from a female I would be very surprised. That Doctor from hell is one of my best,I am glad it made you freak. The doctor is pleased
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AHHHHHHHH omg!!!!! That was freaking kick ass. Omg...ok Im totally adding you to my favorites cuz that creeped me out and i LOVE to be freaked out. Wow...ok that was great. Keep writing girl...seriously that was kick ass!!!
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I do hate doctors from hell... with those evil eyes... and grinning smile... I hate it when they come near me with a needle... I dont trust them with those... lol.. needles dont bother me anymore, but when an evil doctor comes near me... you would expect me to... lol
"I am the doctor, sent from the pits of hell
and your flesh and fear is my favorite smell."
I love that line... it gave me the chills lol...
Luff,
Bella
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Omg, I can't believe you read this...lol, i have good ones but poems like these are not made for the eyes of an angel!!! lol, my nicer ones are , born in this thing called life (hope) her kiss (erotica) and....hmmm....oh yea if you want to laugh there is one called , leather (humor) thank you for the applaud and comment!!!
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sorry to reply so late, my other good ones in poems are, Her kiss (erotic) Pleasures of immortality (dark) My date with suicide (dark) Born in this thing called life (hope) oh geez too many really to say. oh and, Leather (adult humor) there are more tho, i hope you like them
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hey thank you spice, I hope it didn't get you too sick, but I did want to really capture the feel and imagery of horror. This is what the doctor ordered!!
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Thank you blacksabbath, I am glad someone likes this sort of stuff as much as I do.!!! I love horror. which is the reason why I write dark poems. Thank you for the very cool comment I really appreciate that.
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EXCELLENT!
WOW this was really good i loved it the images i got the feeling of actually talking(well listening) to the little voice of my conscience it was so cool! lol and the way the poem flowed it was terrific! keep up the great job!
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This is the kind of poem i spend hours searching for, i really liked this opne, i love poems about gore and i like writing them, very good job
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Thank you so much truth I am glad it made you shiver. The doctor is pleased,
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very dark and scary write i'm getting electric shivers one of the darkest poems I have ever read thanks for entering**
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LMAO! You are quite the peppy one tonight, no? =D How could you not expect a comment from me? Hehe. Well now, I think I'll have to check out some more of your poetry...any recommendations, darling?
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intrigue me wow!!!! I wasn't expecting a comment from you.!! to hear you say your in love I take that as a good thing, I appreciate that very much, and to have you applaud this, what can I say I am very honored thank you!!!!! I hope the doctor didn't scare you too much, he just likes to operate !!! just make sure you don't make an appointment with him, lol
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Holy shit, I think I'm in love.
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spooky, i like it!
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I am glad you liked this one ,it is one of my darkest poems written among the many I have. I wanted to give the reader the best fright or imagery of horror that I could express poetically, thank you kukana!!!!!!!!!!
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This had me TOTALLY capivitated!!!! It was erry and made your skin crawl... imagines ran through my head with each word that I read! Gruesomely awesome struck here!!!! LOL
GREAT JOB!
S~
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Thnx I like this one alot, it's very dark and a bit sick. But the doctor loves it.
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An Orthopedic Surgeon from hell...an original one this is cool..i like this..
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