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Only See

depression draws
me it is a very old
friend i don't know
how to let go
this feeling has
been inside so long
i think i need
help maybe some
kind of pills i'll
overdose and die alone
without letting
anyone know
i might leave
a note but i
wouldn't have much
to say hmm my
life sucked
this was the
only way let
me go don't
worrie don't
pray
don't waste
your tears
on me i am
gone if
only you could
see

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Written January 17th, 2005

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  • Dante Never Dark
    January 17, 2005
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    I liked this , alot of emotion. good imagery. very good job keep up the good work ill be looking forward to it. i think this deserves an applaud