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Closer Than Forever

Of all the things to do
I go an ruin you
How many times I let you in
I end it with a word

But now I'm shown the way
To bring you back to me
Give it all I've got, all you'll ever know

Hearts race, tears shed
I can't believe you're here again
You've come back, will you stay
Closer than forever?

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Written January 17th, 2005

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  • GypsyRose
    January 19, 2005
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    Thanks, JL! I'm pretty sure you know who it is.


  • January 17, 2005
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    awesome poem bethany