at the close of day
the sun sharing it’s last light
just for you and me
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Just thought I'd join the haiku craze and post some I've had for awhile
Written October 29th, 2000
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Awe....
I can see the two lovers...well it could be two friends couldn't it? See that, simple piece well done & it's got an aha moment that makes one wonder! I'm a lover of Haiku & it's nice to have met you. Those are beautiful cats BTW! They look well loved & I'll bet they provide you with a lot of Haiku prompts!
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How selfish! Just for two of you...
of course I understand the meaning, I just like playing dumb on tv.
When in love, the sun and moon shine only for two.
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What a beautiful image and sentiment here. There is something so great about sharing the day with those we love. I think it's spending the close of the day with them that makes me want to wake in the morning
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Loved it!
This was so very precious and done with perfection. I love your haikus...they actually make since to me
Thanks for sharing granna.
Kari -
This is really sweet and loving catz, I really like it, well done, keep up the good haikus, a wonderful form of poetry I think.
best wishes as always
Moonstone Virgo
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Love short stuff too
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Dee, this was one heck of a brilliant Haiku. It had such an allure of sensuality in that last line. I really loved the way you tied it all in together.
~ John
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very lovely! very, very nice.... thank you for your kindly comment on my poem! thangs have truned out well... my parents don't mind my boyfriends as much.... i still miss Mo-Ah tho... she was so pretty! and she was a very talented peanist!...
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very nice haiku. awesome way of looking at sunset, and i loved the imagery in it
very pretty haiku dee
kayla* -
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aww....
so very peaceful* -
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I had a cinquain called 'Last Light' but I changed the title...great image :) -
excellent
another great one! -
don't touch it!
Your poems are great this one has so much love in it -
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This was very good, I hope to see more KU's from you Catz!! -
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you've been hiding these??? LOL.... glad you decided to share them with us Dee...beautifully romantic..such a lovely sentiment!! :) -
excellent
The prayer to share. Wonderful -tj- -
excellent
Another beauty. I think you must be a hopeless romantic. DD ;) -
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Ahhhh! What a lovely image for me to carry through my day today! Thank you, Catz, for the measure of peace this write instilled in my heart, just beautiful--Kelly -
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Very nice..liked the vision.
RR -
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Dee this is so beautiful..just what I needed late at night....~~~GILL~~~ -
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this is beautiful Dee! Very, very precious! *sighs*
Gayla -
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lovely.
:0)
Nam
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