Let me tell you a story
of a girl I once knew.
One who had so much glory
and like a bird she flew.
Let me read you this poem
of all the thoughts in her head.
Maybe then you'll know why
this girl is now dead.
They watch her take flight
all those eyes on her wings.
As she sought out her goals
with all that will-power brings.
They pushed her for more
'til her intentions were blinded.
Now she's fallen to the floor
no longer clear-minded.
I see her twitch and turn
Oh wait, she's not dead.
This girl that has fallen
just spoke to me and said:
"Look in the mirror, eye to eye,
Think to yourself 'It's for me, I fly.'
For I am that girl you are in your head.
I am that girl you thought was dead.
Let's fly again
just me and you.
Without all those people
telling us what to do.
Let's dry the tears
and clean up this mess.
Let's spread these wings
and fly to our success."
Author notes
Ever felt like you lost the person u were?
Written January 17th, 2005
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Dina! OH MY GOSH@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow.. there is noway that that person died! sure hurt, and discoureged, but never will she die, her spirit is too strong to go out!, you still are that person, that fun loving person, always up for adventure, you tell me that i'm always up for adventer and stuff, where do you think i got it from??? you! And you are my guid some times, so i know that that person you truly are will never die, NEVER. GREAT WRITE,... LUV YA. mwah.
love always
Noor lalalolo11 Nooreo(yours and yours only nickname for me)
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Oh my God again! Your poems are absolutely wonderful! Man, you have some massive talent to have the creativity and originalty! Sriously, I don't think I've ever read a poem quite like this. I know what you mean, though... about losing the person you once were. It's happened a couple times, right after I find myself again. Awesome poem, like I said.
~Taylor <3 -
o this was beautifully written and composed. the flow was wonderful and well done. great write. you have talent...keep it up!
Firefly -
This is really good. You have so much imagination. I wish I could accomplish the things you do with words. This is a beautiful poem, no doubt about it. Keep it up.
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another part of life was put into this poem in a beautiful way. great job, keep up the good work!
~*Aj*~ -
Yes, plenty of times. Thats a part of living. You lose yourself, you find yourself. Sometimes someone comes along and helps you but usually you are pretty much on your own.
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Absolutly fabulous
This is very intersesting and I believe in what you write. I think that there are far to many words to describe what you wrote, moving, powerdful, beautiful, engaging I just am in awe of it, absolutly fabulous, well, well done. -
I loved this one ....... keep up the great writing and good luck
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