She whispers in my ear
Passionately sincere
Gazes within my hazel eyes
Saying they sparkle bright
And I tell her it's because
I'm staring into yours
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Written January 17th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Profound Conception by darell.
500 points, ended January 19, 2005, 5 entries
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Beautiful Timothy you've left me trembling
You spread your wings and sing
Your love is the true reflection in your lover’s eyes
A song of sincere love showing your hearts loyalty
Rock on in your love songs
Oh, this is the passion and true reflection of where we all belong
One in our lovers’ eyes
As you soar upon golden wings of paradise
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Beautiful
Beautiful and Inspiring! The attributes of love and devotion were felt in every line. A great tribute to your wonderful relationship with your lover. Great Job! -
Ahh....true love, how very lucky you are! How very lucky she is to know just how lucky you are!
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Perfect!
This is beautiful, what a poeticweaver you are, love ya, and your poems, you rock!!!
-Me
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Lovely!
Very beautiful Daddio, I always love the way you can show your love with your tender poetry, thanks for sharing always, never stop being so sweet!!!
-Lil Tim
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Beautiful!
This was really great Timothy. Your poem reminds me of the saying "The eyes are the mirrors to the soul" Don't forget to decipher your thoughts in the comments box. Avril
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