These tears of pain
Tears of lies
All washed by your thieving smile
Saved by a boat
Until dumped out again
I wait for those years
You grant me freedom
I snatch away everything you own
Why is it so hard for me to give up
Tell the truth, and forget all fears
Committing to u is one thing
Achieving the goal is impossible
I die with the same smile
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Written January 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- Memories... by Evilia.
300 points, ended January 22, 2005, 41 entries
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great poem! i loved it!! i liked the last few lines the best
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great poem!
Edited on Jan 16, 7:56 p.m. because ''. -
the lines
"Why is it so hard for me to give up
Tell the truth, and forget all fears"
i can relate to the dearly, im glad someone can put it in words at least lol.......i honestly cant give up on sum1..i dont wanna go into details but ya lol....awsome poem, glad ur sharing it with people who can relate to it such as myself
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good
i really like the first 2 lines, and i think that the rest of the poem flows together really well. good job -
Good peom.
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