To lose you seems like the tidal wave
passing through my hair pushing me down
I did wrong, turned you down
Not understanding the conditions of my lies
You were close then died out like the burning candle
The burning fire in my heart, breezes away
Those tears only fall from your absence
But this heart has died for it never loves
I'm dead along with my soul
You have freed me, I'll never forget that
Your once love has become pain
Silently this mysterious stranger has walked off
A wave was all i needed
Author notes
Written January 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- Memories... by Evilia.
300 points, ended January 22, 2005, 41 entries
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Your poems have a lot of intensity, you seem to write as if possed by emotions, letting it flow in words. I stopped here because the waves...i just like waves...
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i liked this. the last line was great 'a wave was all i needeed' very original and creative..i like it
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lol I know the feeling..."a wave was all I needed..." Interesting thought...I wasn't too crazy about the poem but I loved that line.
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