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Afraid

I'm so afraid that soon I'll go,
and NO one will care
or even know
I feel so all alone
and lost because
those smiling eyes
I miss so much
have disappeared
don't keep in touch
so now
with tears in my eyes
I sit and cry
and I'm shore
The highest mountain waits for me
but I'm stuck
still drowning in the sea
and soon I know I'll disappear
my biggest dread
my greatest fear
is to be torn from life
and to be forgotten
to be gone
to be lost

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Written January 16th, 2005

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  • styx-angel
    January 28, 2005
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    wwwooowww...i really really like this peice. great write

  • Mnaxcvkj
    January 17, 2005
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    wow... this was a really good poem and i think that you did an excellent job on it! good Work, i enjoyed reading it!
    jess
    *hands you a pink monkey*


  • Sum1sDreamer
    January 16, 2005
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    This is truly a great write! A lot of emtion and time put into this! I hope you never experience this pain again! Because its a very scary feeling. Bes of luck and keep up the great work!