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Never Free

Running wild and free
Oh how I wish I could
But that’s just not for me
It’s just a distance dream

Hearing the others flee
And how I wish I could to
But it wasn’t meant to be
I wasn’t meant to be free

I pray to God
Why not me?
I just can’t take it
I need to be free

To run with my friends
To feel to cool breeze
To jump, to run,
To really be me!

Deep inside my very core
I spread my wings
And my heart it finally soars
Suspended on the wings of freedom

Even though I can not
No one can crush my dreams
Even though I’m trapped
My heart will never be!

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Written January 16th, 2005

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  • Shiga
    January 18, 2005
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    Great job jackie! I loved it! oh I'm sorry that i wasn't online before cuase then we could have all talked but I left to go on google and do my art project SORRRY! i loved the poem though! nice job!

  • Neko
    January 16, 2005
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    yuppers u spelt my name right wow in the first try too...thatnks for the comment and applaude hehehhe lov ya jess
    ~Jackie

  • Mnaxcvkj
    January 16, 2005
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    yay!! awww... this was so0o0o0o0o cute jaquelynne! OMG!! i hope i spelt that right! hehe good job and keep it up! lots of love
    jess
    hugs!