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Push me down...

Every time I stand up
I get pushed back down
Why oh why does this have to happen to me
What did I ever do
Just...
        Chores
       Push me down
       When I stand up
       Let me live my life the way I should
       Don't push me down
       Or you'll be sorry
       These are my dreams
       I'm gonna live up to them,with or with out you
Call me a slut...
Whore I prefer
It sounds much more like me
I don't care about all your bullshit
Take it and shove it
        Chores
Don't
Don't
What ever the hell you do don't push me down!
This is me...
        Chores
My dreams my life...

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Written January 16th, 2005

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  • Brad pitt
    July 8, 2005
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    wat can i say . it is just another great poem.it is short but it means a lot.well anyway good write. hope to read more poems by you.

  • brattygirl
    January 16, 2005
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    Wow, this is great! I like it a lot and it reminds me of times and experiences that I have had. This is a good write and I am looking forward to reading more of your pieces.

  • Dead-Syko
    January 16, 2005
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    HA WOW...