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Memories Of Love / Acrostic

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Memories of a love now lost
Escapes my mind at a cost.
Making the heart skip a beat
Opens the wounds of deceit.
Reliving the pain that I feel
I tried very hard to conceal.
Every time that I think of you
Sadness always makes me feel blue.

Only time I know will heal my heart
For I know I will make a fresh start.

Love will come again to me once more
Only this time I’ll know for sure
Visions I can see of my new man
Entering my life fast as he can.



 

Author notes

2. Heartbreak. DO NOT write about how your significant other cheated on you. Write, instead, about how much it hurts to love your significant other.
Sad Categories.

I don't mind an honest critique off you
Written January 16th, 2005

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  • serene darkness
    March 21, 2005
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    though the lines seemed short and choppy, the poem as itself flowed smoothly. a very subtle mood here, yet very deep. i like that

    Jen


  • jenelda silver member
    February 23, 2005
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    Thank you for commenting on my Poem, I'm glad you liked it,
    Jennifer
    Edited on Feb 23, 11:35 p.m. because ''.

  • FrozenBlueRose
    February 22, 2005
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    i really liked "Memories of love now lost
    Escapes my mind at a cost.
    Making the heart skip a beat
    Opens the wounds of deceit.
    Reliving the pain that I feel
    I tried very hard to conceal.
    Every time I think of you"
    but after that it got kind of unoriginal. I really like your first letter cap things. Well good luck 2 win! ~Silver


  • Poet Raja
    January 27, 2005
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    Beautiful!!!

    Once again Jennifer you have poured your heart and longing and I do hope he has already come or on the way just as you desire, Tall and handsome

    Love from India - Joel -


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    January 20, 2005
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    Your heart will recover from your loss and be

    I love this style of poetry, and I feel such pain with in your words. With the passing of time the beauty of your heart will shine through, and with true friends by your side you will start to feel so much joy nadn love they have for you. You have a gift of poetry with in your blood. And I am proud to read your wonderful writting.
    Poetic Soldier


  • jenelda silver member
    January 17, 2005
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    thank you John, coming from you I am honoured Jenn


  • J Rhys Davies
    January 16, 2005
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    This was a very well written acrostic piece. I liked the fact that you also took the time to rhyme it. Keep penning.

    ~ John


  • iamfromabove
    January 16, 2005
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    This was great jenn. You seam to be on the road to recovery. You rnew man will pop up unexpectedly. Luv Mia


  • angelica silver member
    January 16, 2005
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    Dear Jenn, this is a beautiful Acrostic, I know how you have been feeling, it hurts doen't it, but it will get easier,hope this new man comes into your life soon~Love~Joan

  • Gogetalife
    January 16, 2005
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    Jen, this beautifull and sad in the same time..but at least i see hope for new man..Good luck my friend and you did good job in this acrostic..


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    January 16, 2005
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    This has a very nice flow and rhyme scheme. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for entering and good luck.

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