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Pot Belly(Acrostic)

Protrudes
Over
Trousers

Bulbous
Enormous
Lump
Larger
Yearly.

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Written January 15th, 2005.I love to annoy people.

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  • SEA angel gold member
    July 20

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    I can relate

    Suppose to be funny. That's depressing, to me anyway! J/K. Thanks for entering. They say misery loves company and it IS sort of nice to not feel like the "Lone" Ranger.

  • excellent I love this one.... so funny. Enjoyable. Great job. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.

  • Whoa!

    A one word per line acrostic. This is cute & funny. So ~ You like to annoy people eh? How're you doing at that?
    I annoy people all the time & don't mean to.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 22, 2008
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    this had a little humor to it you did a very great job with this good luck in the contest


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    Well...I must say that being an Aussie (home of the beer belly ) think you've done an excellent job of this one Best of luck


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 30, 2008
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    Great acrostic. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • fakeport
    June 6, 2008
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    Ha ha, very nice. Thanks a lot for your entry.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    You did a really nice job with this piece thank you for shairng and goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes


  • DeadlyTurnip
    September 1, 2007

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    ...lol. Yet disturbing. It's very simple but it's very good. Unfortunatly, you didn't read the rules. Please read the rules again or I'll have to DQ you. Thank you for entering anyway!


  • raggyann
    January 6, 2007
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    this one is funny
    and oh so true
    you made me smile


  • angelica silver member
    January 16, 2005
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    HA HA sounds like my hubby, he has a pot belly,when he comes around a corner I see his belly beore I see him
    Great acrostic and very well thought out~Joan


  • Sherry gold member
    January 16, 2005
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    Well written gramps you decribed the effects well. ((hugs))Thank you for my poem Love, Sherry your grandaughter


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    January 15, 2005
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    Lmao, this is truly the funniest piece I've read. XD Very nice wording. Thanks for entering and good luck.

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