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~--I have a great idea Freak, how--~
about you hit the road with
Your stupid fucking -
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job? You're
blocking
My view
Of the
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Author notes
Written January 15th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- THONGKU a new form - CONTEST by .
300 points, ended January 26, 2005, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Probably the inland empire
Let me guess... Orange County? -
No way dude, i'm from Southern California and if you don't know about the T V set i'm not going to tell you. steve
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Is there a hidden meaning?
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Does no one get this or did I have one just have one to many? omg, no one get this and thats an order! Steve
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football = not the same as hockey.
but bring it.
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Edited on Jan 15, 9:38 p.m. because ''. -
Tsk. Tsk. It's a shame when a woman dares to cum between a man and his TV set. Dang it all!
This is too funny. Good luck in the contest! 
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Well this is very clever
Okay I see this contest is gonna be a fucking blast to read the entries hahaha
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i dont like to comment during a contest... but holy fuck this was funny hahahahaha
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im from toronto eh... so lean forward for christ sake... i'm watching football god damn it
Edited on Jan 15, 8:34 p.m. because ''. -
laughs....
heres a cheeze canadian joke for you:
Why do canadians love doggy style so much?
So we can both watch the hockey game.
-- No tv set blockage there
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This piece is the greatest! I can't seem to think of anything decent to say because I can't stop laughing long enough to write anything. You put it in the category love, it fits and it's ironic but I have to wonder if you did it on purpose or because you just had to pick a category...oh well it's still an amazing poem...t.v. set! It's perfect!
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I love your sense of humour, wickedly dark, great write, made me crease.
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