There is something enchanting about the way
You and I are, when we're together.
The way You pull me gently into your arms
and hold me as if you were the moonlit sky
and I were the only star in the heavens.
How your heart echoes the sound of mine,
as if the world in that moment had stopped.
And you and I were all that had ever existed.
The way your smile brightly lights my life
like a flame igniting fiery flames of passion,
and the gentle touch of your caressing hand
enlightens senses of wanting desires.
How your lips have the lingering sweetest taste
that of never ending tantalizing temptation.
Tenderly and softly they melt into me,
a kiss held in absolute pure perfection
when pressed sensually and delicately to mine.
Worshiping we cherish and forever treasure
the existence of kindling souls that dance
Those moments of precious silence
when your eyes speak a thousand words,
and my soul stirs to drink you in.
Just as the heavens and earth in harmony,
we rise up and fall into one another.
Author notes
Kisses to Die For
Written January 15th, 2005
In a list
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A contest entry
- SOULMATES what do they mean to YOU? by ennovy.
900 points, ended May 26, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITES= BEST LOVE POEMS PLS by Deaths Prayer.
1500 points, ended September 18, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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WOW. This is very passoinate. Very well worded, and lots of metaphors. I love it... !!!!! <
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thank you for entering my contest. this poem was touching. this was a great read.you brought through the physical conditions of love. you painted the picture of love so well. i wish you well in my contest. and i hope you keep penning in the future.
thank you for your entry! there was so much imagery in this poem and you brought love to a greater light and love shined forth. the metaphor you used was great and i am happy you entered my contest. i wish you well in the future and also good luck.
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Beautifully written and a pleasure to read. Thank you for entering and good luck! Keep the ink flowing!
~Donna~
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this is a beautiful piece you explain love wonderfully
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This is totally beautiful and a pleasure to read, this is how love should be.
~sugar~
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There is something enchanting about this tribute to your soulmate. Thanks for entering, and good luck in our contest.
Novy & Brazos
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beautifully poetic...Thank you for entering our contest...novy & brazos
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You do love poems so well. You have that romantic heart and it translates into words so well. Another great write. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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JUDGED!!
This is truely a sweet and romantic piece,
so softly worded with a touch of sensuality.
nicely done poet, all the best to you in the contest
Ken -
Woooh...
So very romantic and so sweet.
A beautiful beautiful write.
I crave for more...
Favourites...
'There is something enchanting about the way
You and I are, when we're together.
The way You pull me gently into your arms
and hold me as if you were the moonlit sky
and I were the only star in the heavens.'
'Just as the heavens and earth in harmony,
we rise up and fall into one another.'
After a long time read something so strong.
Best of luck in the contest.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts.
-Swati
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Stunning write! Absolutely romantic and full of passion. Loved it.
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Very romantic
Okay I really like this piece. It's very fanciful in it's efforts to create this truly benevolent effect of love and admiration. The imagery is very pleasant and the details, though I thought at once to be flashy are now, quite appropriate. It's a very well executed attempt at creating an interesting yet accurate and somewhat comforting intimacy. You were definitely in the zone when you were writing this, it's quite excellent. Very nice writing. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Wow, very beautiful,sensuous and loving... it almost made me cry, remembering a love that deep that's now lost.
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Darling
Whats one more applause
but then I pause
and consider the source
and all its force.
Smoosh
Janet -
good work, i really like this. it brought me back to happier times in my life. thank you.
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Beautiful, Beautiful,
I loved it, you did such an awesome job. Love is somthing that can only be founded with God, If God blesses it, it will be like this, I loved this poem, you did an awesome job decribing an intamicy between two lovers. I can only hope to find somthing like this, I loved it.
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wow...to put your feelings into words...words that can almost jump put and fill you with the same emotions that you have written about....just wow...you are incredibly gifted, and i wish that i could write as good as you. Once again i say wow.
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oops... forgot the applaud
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I love this poem, this poem is like a cup of honey to a sweet tooth, it's craved....Got any more??
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this is truly beautiful
the poem definitely deserves each applause it has earned!
it's delicious... what else can i say that hasn't already been said?
you obviously posted an older favorite of yours. i'm glad you did because, somehow, i missed it before.
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So incredibly romantic,just love all the passion and feeling you put into this work.Looking for more!
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this was such a tastefully romantic piece in contrast to those dreadfully tacky romantic pieces. An absolutely beautiful sense of love in thought feeling and essence such a wonderful achievement. This one is really special and obviously many otheres thought so too. Stella.
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Absolutely amazing, awesome, brilliant and beautiful, this was so full of love yet didn't thrust emotion upon the reader, it was like I wanted to hear all about it. Well done.
Amy xx -
I love this poem, it makes me think of the way that me and my boyfriend still have strong affections for eachother after 2 years..we celebrated yesterday.. Great job and keep up the good work..I really enjoyed this.
Tanya -
Wow, this piece makes me really wish I had a boyfriend right now...or at least a cuddle buddy. I love the background, and the poem is just...beautiful. So romantic and touching. You brought the pure vivid emotion of love straight into focus... I want my Will!! >.<
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I thought that this was a great write, your words flowed together so perfectly, describing a love that you've felt and connected with another soul. I'm not that fond of love writings, but if one is amazing I completely fall in love with it, just like I did with this one. It's not your normal sappy love write, it's more then that. You've added pure emotion and such vivid imagery that catches the readers eye. Thank you for posting this I loved it, and if you wouldn't mind checking out some of my writings it would be greatly appreciated. Keep writing, -Heather
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This poem is intoxicating...I just want more and more, can't have enough of a good thing.
I guess I wasn't alone in my taste, looks like there have been a few others, lol.~vj -
yes it is if only I were lol thanks for reading
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This is a beautiful poem. Yet I am a sucker for love poems. I love it and I think it is wounderful. I am going to run through adn read some more of your work. I think this one is beautiful it is a wounderful feeling to be in love.
~**~TearsForSean~**~ -
Beautiful and lovely
Wow this is a really good and romantic write here. You did fine with the graphics and what you wanted to convey. It is so nice and I will bookmark it. -
Simply Beautiful
Just beautiful, this is the first poem I have read of yours and I know I will have to read more. I'm glad I ran across this, it is simply amazing. Keep writing, I am going to add you to my favorites so I can keep reading. Great job.
~Babygirl~ -
giggles .........catches the applause......falls down
damn that was a good one 
thanks doll!
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Simply stunning I have no other words
.. heres another applause to add to your collection 
catch
~Aimee
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*Jaw drops as Smidge goes to cuddle up to her boyfriend*
~Smidge~
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You have a way with writing love poetry. It flows so well and the imagary stands out, and best of all you can tell it comes from within. Bravo.
~~~~~~Loveand Light~~~~~~
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Wow....Wow....I loved this, the flow was awesome the picture you painted was awesome and the whole scene that was set by this was spectacular!!!! You are a very touching poet.
Keep writing PLEASE!!!!!!!!
Countrybabe
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good job with this one. i like the imagery and stuff here. my favorite lines are Those moments of precious silence
when your eyes speak a thousand words,
good job and thnx for entering -
I seem to be going against general opinion here, but ... I really like the sentiment here (obviously, who's going to go against love?), but I think that perhaps you've tried to contain too much love into one poem. Just think how much more precious you could make the moment if you just focused on one itty bitty bit of it. Whether or not you choose to consider my suggestion, I hope that your romantic heart survives (we need more people like you in the world).
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Excellent!
This is truly one of the most beautiful love poems I have ever read. The words you used and the context of the are magnificent. A poem of love but also erotic at the same time. I can tell you are a romantic at heart. I applaude you on this poem. Be Well and Be Blessed. -
Awesome Poem
Hi there,
Wow this was fantastic, and beautiful, lovely image and description too. The flow was awesome. This was totally inspirational. The background set the whole thing of too. I hope that you will keep up the great work.
Best of wishes to you and yours
Blue moon
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This is gorgeous. Simply beautiful. I love the background, it fits the sentiment of the piece wonderfully. This is the sort of feeling I always wish I could have for someone. Critique wise, theres not much I can say....It flows nicely, your words are chosen well. Overall a great piece. And the picture at the top is just as expressive as the background.
Always,
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i wish I could capture love in this light!!! how beautifull this one is written (and once again, a treat to read on the day of love!) amazing job!!!
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this makes love seem so perfect. i love this poem, great job. i only wish i could relate!! its the love i've always wanted nice job
-olivia -
LENA Another beautiful poem under your belt. This was tender sweet. You definetly pieced together the right poem for this background
twinzy
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'wow that was really good. i like alot i love the way you used such words to describe your feelings. it was an amazing peice to read, i enjoyed. BOOKMARK! it was so beautiful and i can relate so much, i can definetly tell you are in love and lovin it. congrats. much luvs~~your fan for now on~~~Liriel~~
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You can capture love with you words my friend. This is so sweet. To feel love the way you do. I must have lost it. ~~Shannon~~
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Oh, this is incredibly beautiful!
So romantic and soft...I really love this. I'm
speechless Thank you for sharing and God Bless
you!
~ Katie
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this poem is so romantic it has great flow and well written all the work u writen so far is very good so keep iyt up ur doin exllcent
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This is lovely, very loving and gorgous.I like it alot.
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wow... im speechless... that was beautiful!
xoxo<3
manda -
This is so heartfelt that I started to cry! Amazing, and wonderfully written! Great job with this!
~Summer Kiss~
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WOW... This poem is VERY beautiful... This is a very sweet love poem... It is very well written... I love the metaphors that are used... Especially this one
"Just as the heavens and earth in harmony,
we rise up and fall into one another."
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You my dear are a magnificent writer when it comes to love and things like that. I can really feel the love and hope of the relationship and it moves me so much. I am so...just..wow. Ok..totally speechless and absolutly moved
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You have one heck of a following. The most trophies I have seen. Based on that, I would say you must be the best.
I found nothing wrong in this poem, I do like to find something in order to give a balanced critique. Perhaps, you see faults. It is excellent. It is rhythmic and musical. It does draw you in and makes you want that kind of relationship.
Andy -
awesome
i love the emotion that shows through this poem....its amazing...i can feel what you feel in this...great job...keep it up!! Write ON~~~~~~Bridget -
wow well done.
wow that was beautiful. the style fits perfectly with the content. i know this feeling well and it's a really difficult thing o put on paper... but you managed it!! i'm going to go and see if you're other poetry is as enjoyble as thins. -
excellent
Wonderful poem of love written with such emotion. You capture the sense of love and togetherness. Your poem shares the beauty of love and it's magical powers. A poem worthy of many reads . Thank you for writing and sharing. Very well done -
Excellent\Very Lovely!
Awe, so refreshing to read you my dear, you have the poetic touch that moves me, this piece is so beautifully penned my forever friend, and I do thank you for opening up here for us to see such a lovely heart you share and have within your lovely shell....
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver
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Hit Me Like A Brick.
lOVE IT, lOVE IT, LOVE ITTTTTT!!!! This poem is so beautiful, very enchanting, thewords so gracefully spoken like they just flow into eachother like a flowing skirt or a satin curtain that crinkles when the wind pushes gently against it when the window is open. I think that you are an awesome writer, so creative and this work really proves that. All of the words here are so soft yet speak so loud. How did you pull this off? I am so affected by this poem....I almost wish that I felt this way in my life, but it is so emotion evoking, I am a afraid to even think about this experience and these feelings. I am really moved by this write especially this part....."Those moments of precious silence
when your eyes speak a thousand words,
and my soul stirs to drink you in. " This is so beautiful, i almost want to cry. I am so chilled by this like a song that I really like would give me the chills. You have a very brilliant and innocent stance and theme in your work. I am unbelievably drawn to it. I can say "Awesome" a thousand times over, but Iw on't because I think the poetry here speaks for itself.....On a scale from 1-10...I give this poem a solid 8. Great job with the clarity of the meaning in the words you use. I absolutely adored this one!!! Thank you very much for the enjoyable poem and will see if the rest of your poetry is as inviting as this piece is.
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Wow, awesome!!!!! You do have a way with words!!!!
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Took my breath away.
Absolutey devine. I want to steal it, print it,
frame it and send it to my love. But maybe I will
just direct him to this page.
You deserve all that applause, oh evil wench.
The way You pull me gently into your arms
and hold me as if you were the moonlit sky
and I were the only star in the heavens.
I love it.
Peace be yours ~ always, crisstiena
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This is beautiful! I'm stealing the background! I love it- you have a beautiful way of showing and not telling what you're thinking- great job!
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Another great write..very romantic and detailed. Thank you.
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I have recently met and fallen in love with a wonderful girl
and this poem describes some of the feelings and emotional
experiences we have shared and which I feel are common to
the very uncommon thing we call love, which I feel in the
end is indescribable.
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gorgeous
This is absolutely gorgeous. You create awesome visuals with your words. The opening line..so simple and sweet.."There's something enchanting about the way You and I are, when we're together." Awesome job hon! -
LOl whats that look for
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Excellent!
A very tender tribute to one who must love you very much.
I lived your feelings for this person.
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It was hard to read through all the applauses. But it deserved tham all great write.
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oh my god::literally goes speechless for a moment:: this was really really great work, probably the best one outta what 3 or 4 that ive read of ur work, keep it up, this is the reason i put u o my favs list, again keep it up gurl. byebye.
britt. -
i just love these love poems, they take my breath away. You have quite a way with words. I was very taken with it. Thank you for your time and entry.
Nicole -
If only things could be this pleasant all the time. Beautiful, and touching. This peice was definitely worth the read. Take care!
Suz -
INCREDIBLE
omg this is FANTASTIC... you really capture what being with the one you love feels like. this is an amazing write. keep it up!!! -
This is such a beatiful poem!! I have fallen in love with it. Absoltuly fabulous!!! You wrote this so well.
I especially loved the lines:
'''The way You pull me gently into your arms
and hold me as if you were the moonlit sky
and I were the only star in the heavens'''
Brilliant! so absolutely brilliant! wow!!!!
Bets of regars to a GREAT poet,
Romeos captive
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splendid
what i really like about this is how you wrote about love and it wasnt korny and by that i mean you didnt write about love like everyone else this was good and very creative of you and i think you did a marvelous job -
GREAT
This is a really great poem. I can feel the energy and the heart that was put into this piece. I absolutley love it! It's so awesome. -
Awsome, I love it! Truth, freedom, beauty, and above all things love. Amazing job!!
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that was a very nice poem
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i am so happy you were born into this world and decided one day that you were going to write this poem. its so beautiful. it's true love, isn't it!?!!?? my friend is seriously in love i think and im gonna tell her about this poem because i believe it describes everything about her and her boyfriend. i love your background too, thats so pretty. keepup the good work.
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This is very well written..one could just float away on your words..get lost in a feeling like this....such a wonderful feeling it is and yet so hard to put in words but you have done quite wonderfully..thank you for sharing your thoughts
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this is an awesome poem! well put together.
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A beautiful poem written with much love and adoration. The imagery it builds in the mind is wonderful. Excellent .. Loved this much...Take care..mal
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Whoa! Maljor talent here, folks, let her shine! You rock...it is such a cute and totally sweet poem and I wuv this lotses.
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I must say you have certainly embraced a lot of that womanly charm in this poem. Your passion shinesbrightly. Don't ever let those lights dim.
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This was a really good poem. I must say I also love your back ground. Again wonderful poem. Keep up the good job.
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WOW
Whoa! Words cannot express how much I love this! This is such a wonderful piece, it's so...... wow. I love muchies! Wonderful job!
Princess,
~Kya~ -
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very nice chose of words very nice i love it and as you can see i like everyone else does too!
keep it up!!
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sweet...
"Those moments of precious silence
when your eyes speak a thousand words,
and my soul stirs to drink you in. "
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Well written
WOW!! That was so sweet. Great word usage and feeling. Keep up the good work. -
Wonderful imgery. You really have a way with words. Every line is beautiful. Pen on, poet
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this is a masterpiece! I love it!!
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This....is perhaps the best description of how I feel about the man I love. This was simply fabulous!
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your poem is very visual, because you described it so well. "How your lips have the lingering sweetest taste" is my favorite line in your poem.
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Lovely Poem
Oh wow, this is the most beautiful description of love I have ever laid eyes upon. The wonderful wordsof your poetry have touched me deeply and I can clearly see other readers as well. Your poetic talent is glowing warmly with your love and it shows itself through your beautiful poetry. I am glad we are All Blessed through your gift of poetic words once again. I want to Thank You for All of us for sharing both Yourself and Your wonderful gift of poetry with all of us. Its great you share your poetic art which brings us together never to be apart. Your Number One Reading Fan, MickPigKnuckles
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Brilliant poem, flows beautifully.
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"you were the moonlit sky/ and I were the only star in the heavens" Oh gods, that's like having a tiny solitary pearl held upon high by endless silk of sky.
"we rise up and fall into one another" especially reminds me, apart of the whole, of some Snape-Harry love stories. Endlessly endearing.
"your caressing hand/enlightens senses of wanting desires."
These senses you mention feel like they extend to the non-sensory senses, if that makes sense, and is very humanistic; very powerful.
The words are soft as clouds and they just float through the eyes and into the mind and heart. Great quillwork. I feel rather tranquil at the moment, amazingly. It's not a tapestry you've woven, but a toasty shawl for my heart to wear.
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BEAUTIFUL! its so pretty....i hope you win the contest, you deserve to! this piece is so wuvly! *hugs PurpleSky* well done! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx kiss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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How sweet! It's just adorable, really pretty and loving.. I like this line the best:
Those moments of precious silence
when your eyes speak a thousand words,
I think it is so sweeet...
Cevanme Nimue
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