I'm really starting to doubt how well my name suits me, I feel like just quitting.
amour/avarice
hE YElled Sorry
Lying Out Over his KINGdom
Playing Out PeoPle IN a Gross domiNEARing way/
leaVing Out hIs heart of iCE
SurrOUNDING his emptiness With his ARM
THere was noThing Out to begin
HE did not feel, ARgueably/
Testing Out to BE aGaIN AloNE
Without being alone/
Testing Out BEfore the end
GrINning at what he's doNe
his life, the shOW
and i, a supporting cast member
with no pay
Other poem inside the other one:
EYES LOOKING POPPING NEAR
VOICE SOUNDING WARMTH TO HEAR
TO BEGIN A NEW
TO BEGIN NOW
amour/avarice
hE YElled Sorry
Lying Out Over his KINGdom
Playing Out PeoPle IN a Gross domiNEARing way/
leaVing Out hIs heart of iCE
SurrOUNDING his emptiness With his ARM
THere was noThing Out to begin
HE did not feel, ARgueably/
Testing Out to BE aGaIN AloNE
Without being alone/
Testing Out BEfore the end
GrINning at what he's doNe
his life, the shOW
and i, a supporting cast member
with no pay
Other poem inside the other one:
EYES LOOKING POPPING NEAR
VOICE SOUNDING WARMTH TO HEAR
TO BEGIN A NEW
TO BEGIN NOW
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My Poetry
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grievances set to the tune of the elevator
hovering over the unwavering existance of ants -
Nameless faces passing by my memory
Blocks of hair, pieces of body, voices echoing -
There was a guy on the street and I loved him.
He was there for only a moment and it was true. -
Early morning rises and the day begins
A reflection of the past and the secret
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ArrowToAshes on October 17, 2004Very nice. The titles describe the poems well, and give a little pre-view so people know what they're going to read.
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poe-ette-ess on October 16, 2004I took your advice and titled all of my poetry, tell me what you think?
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ArrowToAshes on October 12, 2004I don't know if you've considered giving your pieces titles, but it might make them less daunting for readers...
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L. David Stuart on October 5, 2004smart asssss
