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Placeinmyheart14• Show poetry

"Reach for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."

I am a fun outgoin person. I'm very loud and always try to have a smile on my face and try to make people laugh. I strive to be the best that I can be and to be as positive as possible. I am able to be who I am because I can get all my feelings out when I write poetry. It isn't just something I do for fun, it's something I do to keep me going every day.

Ummmm I had been in love but that didn't work out too well. Boys are difficult. A lot of my more recent poems have to do with our break up because it really effected me. My other poems deal with my depression, my brother, the death of my other brother, and anything else that happens to be on my mind. It's all real because I think that poetry can not make an impact and change the way you feel without coming straight from your heart. Some things are from my diary others are from the depths of my feelings but nothing you read of mine will not be true.

Since I've been on this sight I have discovered many gifted and talented poets. I only wish I could be as good as them. Some of the poets are:
morethanthesun14
Evey McClain
BellaVita
Bitter Sweet Angel
MyLifeSucks
TheDarkHollow
VanillaBean
VanillaWhispers
lonelywhispers
HiddenTears
DarkSweetDutch
ThatLyricsGuy
McMouse
darkworld4ever
first model
kagome1320
diamarie
ummmm I can't remember the rest when I do though I will be sure to add them in. Because a lot of people on this site deserve recognition.

Please read some of my poetry. If you like say it. If you don't like it say it. I wanna' know what people think so that I can become a better writer. So please, say what you have to say. Get it off your chest. I don't care how blunt it is. I wanna' become a better poet...critiques and encouragement are the way to become one. So please read my poetry and tell me what you think.

Here are some of my favorite quotes:

"You will find happiness in chocolate unless you're allergic to it."
~Anderson

"I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh but I never knew looking back on the laughs would make me cry."
~Unknown

"The most wasted of all days is one without laughter."
~E. E. Cummings

"Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where the is no path and leave a trail behind."
~Ralph Waldo Emerson

Well those are some of my favorite quotes. I think that they are pretty sweet.

Ummm before you go know that I say what I mean. My poetry comes from my heart. A lot of what I have written has to do with what I have felt some of it is as current as now. Poetry has helped me through depression but God and my best friend have helped me even more.

Dance has definately been my outlet for everything. It's by far one of my favorite things to do. I take ballet, jazz, tap, hip hop, and all of the different variations of each type. Along with dance I love to sing, act, write poetry (obviously), and hang out with my friends.

Hope you enjoy my writing. Have a wonderful day. LYL and hope to get some comments from you.

"Whatever you feel just write it because that is the only way you're wounds can ever heal."
~Me

My Poetry

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  • Why
    WHY DO PEOPLE HAVE TO LEAVE
    WHEN THEY KNOW IT CAUSES SO MUCH PAIN?
    26 lines, April 24, 2006. In Collaboration
  • Katrina
    My family all lives in Louisiana and Mississippi
    They had to leave before it hit
    63 lines, 2 comments, April 24, 2006. In Personal
  • You Lied
    You promised you'd always be there
    You promised you'd call every day
    22 lines, 7 comments, July 30, 2005. In Sad
  • When No One Else Cared
    When No One Else Cared
    You were there for me
    28 lines, 3 comments, July 27, 2005. In Hope

Guest Book

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  • MCmouse on June 5, 2006
    Yo, moving to Colorado about July 4. I'm driving from Washington. Yeah, this is just a reply to a comment that you left a long time ago on my AP profile...

    ps. myspace.com/sportigoth

    if that address doesnt work, email me or something and I'll send you my name. That is, if you have a myspace...
    Edited on Jun 05, 5:07 p.m. because ''.
  • placeinmyheart14 on July 25, 2005
    Hey thanks so much for the comment that is really nice of you. I loved both of your poems as well. Love ya lots. And maybe comment on some more of mine I would love to do the same.
    ~Eliza
  • XWingsOfSilverX on July 20, 2005
    Hey! I just wanted to let you know that your poetry is really good. I love reading it! It has such great emotion and most of it has great flow. Don't ever stop writing!
    -Amanda
  • MCmouse on July 10, 2005
    'Hey, what part of CO are you from. Im currently in Boulder right now, and im trying to find somebody to chill with on my days off, but i want somebody who has simuler interest. Im 15, normally from WA, but in CO for the summer, working for my uncle. If your any where close to where I'm at right now, IM here on AP or email me at soccrmouse2@aol.com. Im very bored here. I'll be moving here at the end of the next school year, so it wont be a short term friendship. OH, im a male, about 6'0-6'3 (havent measured in forever), My personality and taste in clothes include GOTHIC, SPORTY, and...something else that is a lil bit unique to myself. As if an athletic goth isnt unique enough. HAHA. aight, write back. Id love to hear from ya.

    ~Mike S. F. C. (inicials) Mouse (not how i look, it was just my favorate animal in 2nd grade, and the name just stuck).

    I must tell you, that was all copied and pasted. I sent it to about 30 people today to most people of ages 14-15 in Colorado. You actually sound pretty cool. Im gonna read some of your poetry after this, but i gotta tell you, your quote is AWESOME. but even better is that is true. well, off to read one of your poems. get back to me. Bye

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