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"My intention is to tell of bodies changed
To different forms; the gods, who made the changes,
Will help me -or I hope so- with a poem
That runs from the world's beginning to our own days."
-Ovid
"...and dream until the day,
of Truth which gold can never buy
and baubles that it may"
-Poe
"men may sleep, and they may have their
throats about them at that time;
and, some say, knives have edges. ..."
II,i Henry VI
-Shakespeare
To different forms; the gods, who made the changes,
Will help me -or I hope so- with a poem
That runs from the world's beginning to our own days."
-Ovid
"...and dream until the day,
of Truth which gold can never buy
and baubles that it may"
-Poe
"men may sleep, and they may have their
throats about them at that time;
and, some say, knives have edges. ..."
II,i Henry VI
-Shakespeare
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- I really like your poems. Nice work. Just thot Id say that, if u ever wanna say how crappy mine are, feel free lol, or tell me how to make them betetr, i love that critisism.
- Firstly yep you are right it should be titled -où est la liberté- or where is the liberty. Secondly without sounding like I'm kissing your arse. i appreciate the constructive comments that you mentioned about the piece.It takes a lot of bollocks to criticize a complete stranger. I'm gonna figure out how to remove the piece,tinker with it and put it back in the competition. I notorious for just writing till I'm all used up and when you go over the same piece time and time again you start to miss things. I appreciate your candidness
- I think it's interesting that your favorite book is "Tess of the d'Urbervilles"; it was assigned summer reading for our AP Lit class (and the only one I read) and everyone but me seemed to detest it. I also find it interesting that you, yourself are the first one to say that you comment scathingly, but that you are fair in your criticisms and honest in your critiques. Rock on.
- I like how you critique my poetry because of my writing style. Clearly you are the more advanced than I am in grammar and punctuation, and clearly your view should be heard. After all, social status is completely and utterly connected to the free flow type of poetry.
I like your honesty, your willingness to ascend to the core of the issue with a poem that clearly needs to be addressed. And that you cover the good side with the bad. - See all
on Dec 15 2007 10:18 AM
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