"My intention is to tell of bodies changed
To different forms; the gods, who made the changes,
Will help me -or I hope so- with a poem
That runs from the world's beginning to our own days."
-Ovid
"...and dream until the day,
of Truth which gold can never buy
and baubles that it may"
-Poe
"men may sleep, and they may have their
throats about them at that time;
and, some say, knives have edges. ..."
II,i Henry VI
-Shakespeare
To different forms; the gods, who made the changes,
Will help me -or I hope so- with a poem
That runs from the world's beginning to our own days."
-Ovid
"...and dream until the day,
of Truth which gold can never buy
and baubles that it may"
-Poe
"men may sleep, and they may have their
throats about them at that time;
and, some say, knives have edges. ..."
II,i Henry VI
-Shakespeare
- Last seen on Jul 6 6:33 AM 2008. Member since April 6, 2005.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 114 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "not like you have many options...".
- I am a 20 year old guy (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student of architecture.
- I have 114 comments, 2 contests, 23 poems, 1 story
My Poetry
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we started out by killing all the unicorns
and the dragons.8 lines, 1 comment, July 31, 2005. In Contemporary -
hard ice and effevescent lullabies,
all clear on clear on clear in clear glass.8 lines, 3 comments, April 30, 2005. In Contemporary
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promise me everything will be okay. / / -everything will be fine. / / if i was sad, would you paint me a picture / and try to remind me what happy was? / / - i can't paint, / but i'd draw you my best stickman / / touches to soft t
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Hell In Harmony on July 26, 2005I really like your poems. Nice work. Just thot Id say that, if u ever wanna say how crappy mine are, feel free lol, or tell me how to make them betetr, i love that critisism.
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fascinated and lost on April 23, 2005Firstly yep you are right it should be titled -où est la liberté- or where is the liberty. Secondly without sounding like I'm kissing your arse. i appreciate the constructive comments that you mentioned about the piece.It takes a lot of bollocks to criticize a complete stranger. I'm gonna figure out how to remove the piece,tinker with it and put it back in the competition. I notorious for just writing till I'm all used up and when you go over the same piece time and time again you start to miss things. I appreciate your candidness
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Taco Sauce on April 21, 2005I think it's interesting that your favorite book is "Tess of the d'Urbervilles"; it was assigned summer reading for our AP Lit class (and the only one I read) and everyone but me seemed to detest it. I also find it interesting that you, yourself are the first one to say that you comment scathingly, but that you are fair in your criticisms and honest in your critiques. Rock on.
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Joe Spencer on April 20, 2005I like how you critique my poetry because of my writing style. Clearly you are the more advanced than I am in grammar and punctuation, and clearly your view should be heard. After all, social status is completely and utterly connected to the free flow type of poetry.
I like your honesty, your willingness to ascend to the core of the issue with a poem that clearly needs to be addressed. And that you cover the good side with the bad.
