You are not a beautiful or unique snowflake. And neither am I.
If you wish to drown,
do not torment yourself
with shallow water.
Now go read all of my AP boyfriend's shit, or else I will dispatch a squad of ninjas to run over your cat with a lawnmower.
allpoetry.com/Poets/John%20Yelling
If you wish to drown,
do not torment yourself
with shallow water.
Now go read all of my AP boyfriend's shit, or else I will dispatch a squad of ninjas to run over your cat with a lawnmower.
allpoetry.com/Poets/John%20Yelling
- Last seen on Apr 2 4:57 PM 2006. Member since April 3, 2005.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 231 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "You make me sick. Look at you!".
- I am a 19 year old girl (USA)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a super-secret ninja sent from the future to kill you.
- I have 231 comments, 1 column, 37 poems, 1 story
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The Lord sees the sparrows fall – and snickers
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That January morning I felt immortal, so I skipped breakfast and left for school without a coat. It was the second semester of my senior year and the anxiety of college w
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painted jezebel on July 27, 2005Proud to be a mess? That's completely pathetic. When I said "pulling shit from your ass" I was refering to your lying.
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Disturbedmess on July 27, 2005then you put your two cents in and you drop it, i know im a mess, you know IM PROUD TO BE ONE, and im very good at pulling shit from ass, thats how i write some of my BEST POETRY. its expression. if you dont like, well fuck, i dont care, and neither does she, so just leave it at that.
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painted jezebel on July 27, 2005I read other poems that she wrote to get a feel for her work, and found that all her writing is just her complaining. Using poetry to express your pain would be fine too, but again, hers was not expressive or inventive at all.
The attitude that people should not post critical comments is a little baffling to me. What would be the point of posting anything except to accept advise on how to improve? You certainly are a 'mess'. I never told her that she didn't matter. Congratulations on pulling shit out of your ass.
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painted jezebel on July 27, 2005I'm not sure where you developed the idea that I'm mad at you. I was actually trying to be nice. You're the one that has been attacking me. I was hoping to make you realize that you could write really good poetry if you could get over the whole moping attitude you have. However, you are obviously in denial, so there's really nothing more I can say about that.
