My Immortal ~ Evanescence
I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your fears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I'e held your hand through all of these years
But you still have... all of me
You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the
Life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
And your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I've held your hand through all of these years
But you still have... all of me
I've tried to hard to tell myself that you're gone
And though you're still with me
I've been alone all along
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I've held your hand through all of these years
But you still have...
All of me...
Okay, yeah, um... my name is Ashley. I'm from Indiana. Wanna know anything about me, ask me!!
I write poetry - DUH!! But it's all kinda psycho. I'm Bipolar and what not so yeah. It screws with my writing cycle. I used to write such normal poem, too. Okay well thats all I can think of right now.
And last but not least, Michael. We have a lot, don't we? Our relationship... our own "one time at band camp..." haha. It's been you who has helped pull me through all of this pain I've been suffering the past few years. Through everything with Robbie, my father, my grandfather, and school, you have been there to hold my hand during, and for what you missed out on, you have helped me overcome the pain. I love you so much. You mean so much more to mean than you realize. 12-19-03
XOXO
-Ashley
I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your fears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I'e held your hand through all of these years
But you still have... all of me
You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the
Life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
And your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I've held your hand through all of these years
But you still have... all of me
I've tried to hard to tell myself that you're gone
And though you're still with me
I've been alone all along
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I've held your hand through all of these years
But you still have...
All of me...
Okay, yeah, um... my name is Ashley. I'm from Indiana. Wanna know anything about me, ask me!!
I write poetry - DUH!! But it's all kinda psycho. I'm Bipolar and what not so yeah. It screws with my writing cycle. I used to write such normal poem, too. Okay well thats all I can think of right now.
And last but not least, Michael. We have a lot, don't we? Our relationship... our own "one time at band camp..." haha. It's been you who has helped pull me through all of this pain I've been suffering the past few years. Through everything with Robbie, my father, my grandfather, and school, you have been there to hold my hand during, and for what you missed out on, you have helped me overcome the pain. I love you so much. You mean so much more to mean than you realize. 12-19-03
XOXO
-Ashley
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painfuldemise on May 2, 2004thx for your compliments!! i really appreciate them!!!
~*~ash~*~
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DeadxxDaisies on April 14, 2004First of all, I'm probably late in replying because I haven't been able to get on in a while. TYSM! You've made me very happy. I'm glad you enjoyed my parody~ Lord of the Strings.
::hands them a cookie for being willing to read the long story::
p.s. Evanescence is my favorite group!! I always want to cry when I hear My Immortal... I have to say that my favorite though is Paper Flowers or Hello.
P.s.s. Gothis Romanc is INCREDIBLE!!! I didn't know what to expect when I clicked but it's amazing!! So flowing and darkly beautiful and captivating. I can't say enough! I'm adding this one to my faves right away -
SkaterAnt on March 28, 2004this is definitely a different perspective on relationships
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painfuldemise on March 26, 2004Haha, thanks!! My Immortal is an awesome song, isn't it? Hey, if you don't mind, could you read some of my poetry and give me your opinion? I know it's all sorta psycho but ya know. lol. Well, talk to ya later!!
