That Sounds Wonderful
Good poetry
Makes a beautiful naked woman
Materialize from
Words,
Who then says,
With a sword precariously waving
In her hands,
“If you look at my loins
I will cut off your head,
And reach down and grab your spirit
By its private parts,
And carry you off to heaven
Squealing in joy.”
Hafiz says,
“That sounds wonderful, just
Wonderful.
Someone please….start writing
Some great
Lines.”
(Hafiz)
Good poetry
Makes a beautiful naked woman
Materialize from
Words,
Who then says,
With a sword precariously waving
In her hands,
“If you look at my loins
I will cut off your head,
And reach down and grab your spirit
By its private parts,
And carry you off to heaven
Squealing in joy.”
Hafiz says,
“That sounds wonderful, just
Wonderful.
Someone please….start writing
Some great
Lines.”
(Hafiz)
- Last seen 1 day ago. Member since November 5, 2007.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 30 comments.
- I am a 50 year old person (United States)
- I have 30 comments, 10 poems
My Poetry
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Hobbling, slowly, slowly, struggling through the heavy doors; one with cane, one in slippers, snow white hair, frail, hunched, clutching one another-ninety, the two of them; married 70 years, her wedding band worn down to a t1 lines, 1 comment, November 13
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Are we caught in a whirlwind, you and I? So fast, so furious. Where is it taking us? Where will we land? As we spin with such force will th8 lines, August 12, 2008
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Do you love me with the sweet love that makes the moon aglow, the stars with fire, the oceans flow, the rain that falls, the lions roar, th2 lines, August 9, 2008
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Your love has awakened the sleeping giants within my soul. The giants of unrestrained.....desire, surrender, ecstasy, fantasy; your love ha0 lines, 1 comment, August 3, 2008
