im not good but thats why im here. to get criticism so i can become good. i have become better over the years. when i first started out i was 15 and now im 18.
- Last seen on Mar 24 6:06 PM. Member since November 24, 2004.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 29 comments.
- I am a 18 year old girl from New Hampshire (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm working at a childcare.
- I have 29 comments, 8 poems, 1 story
My Poetry
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Sick. I’m walking
Tick? I’m talking.28 lines, 1 comment, October 22, 2008. In Pain -
She said, "I'm always comin' out
When the ice is falling down. -
Now it’s all black
And feeling will conquer logic -
city's still breathing (but barely it's true)
through buildings gone missing like teeth.
My Stories
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she slowly aproaches me with the broom in her hand. Not AGAIN! i think to myself. what did i do thisshe slowly approaches me with the broom in her hand. Not AGAIN! i think to myself. what did i do this time? if i weren't so afraid i would dart out of here. i would get away fr235 lines, 3 comments, April 9, 2005. In <200 lines, Other
