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Onion-flower

I love rough grinding harshness of language.  

I was born on the same day as Slyva Plath.  Not the same year but the same day of the year.  Ever read her "poem for a birhday"?

  • Last seen on Nov 17 10:26 AM 2006. Member since June 22, 2003.
  • I'm a citrine experience poet for 161 comments.
  • I am a 27 year old guy (usa)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a Teacher and Artist.
  • I have 161 comments, 1 contest, 2 columns, 16 poems

My Poetry

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  • Picture an amphibious bicycle,
    now think about that for a while.
    16 lines, 3 comments, January 17, 2005. In Humor
  • Greasey guy in the corner
    eating potatoe chips, drinks
    14 lines, 11 comments, October 10, 2003. In Other
  • Poetry like speedy sketch
    impulsive and emotional
    35 lines, 1 comment, September 28, 2003. In Other
  • I was in love with life
    not you
    33 lines, 7 comments, August 13, 2003. In Love

Guest Book

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  • because its bitter on December 18, 2003
    Thanks for your comment, I switched madness to eccentricities, which I fancy much better. No, I've never been anyone by the name of "velvet", but you aren't the only person who thinks they've seen me before...
    Am I really a punk? I think maybe darling, that I just am a nice person, allowing you to excersice your vision when attempting to read my page...or maybe I'm just hiding all my new poems...or maybe I just like the picture so well that I am willing to let people strain to read my things...I'm currently searching for a new background, but have not yet been able to find one.....
  • Morning View on December 2, 2003
    I was only joshing! You're opinionated in the good way! lol..
  • Felicity Dolor on November 12, 2003
    in response to your comment on "Dangerous Muse":

    Thank you very much for your comment and suggestions. As I reread my poem after reading your comment I realized that "so many things I can't say" does sound... well, it doesn't make for original, intellectual poetry. When I wrote that line, I was quoting what someone had said to me. Hmm.. interesting.. I think I have to leave it in, though. But thanks for the suggestions. ^_^
    I don't think I had read any of your poetry before, but I stole your name off one of Requiem of Night's poem pages. I'd seen you on Lilith's too. They're both good friends of mine that write EXTREMELY well, so I'm sure you do too, I'll have to read more of your stuff. Peace.
    Liz
  • jealousdominatrix on November 9, 2003
    I was born on the same day as Fidel Castro and Annie Oakley.

    -jealous

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