i love music and i am most inspired by alkaline trio because they know exactly how to get to me ripping through each cord on the electric guitar with the custom distortion that grabs hold of your ears and doesnt let go untill the song is over alkaline trio bleeder is a song that hit me sooo close to home but anyway my writing i write when i feel the need to creating the poetry i have a unique style where i rhyme quick and i dont even mean to . . . try giving my poetry a shot and get back to me with some comments and what you think would improove the poem because tears fall from jade is flipping long . . . but compact with information its more like a form of a story in poetry but its the deepest ive gone with my writing but definitly not my darkest if you enjoy my writing i will be more than happy to send you more i only have two on here but there lengthy lol i hope you enjoy
- Last seen on Nov 14 1:23 AM. Member since March 6, 2006.
- I'm a topaz horse poet for 17 comments.
- I am a 17 year old guy (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a writer.
- Visit my homepage at jackdidllysquat
- I have 17 comments, 12 poems
My Poetry
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this is your life so grab the pen so permanant and write all your wildest dreams like you grabbed my hand that night and softly carressed it across your cheek just to feel the touch of my skin and my love through my fingertip0 lines, July 24, 2008
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Tears Fall From Jade / In the darkness of the mourning that never ends / My cousin and I are at the top of this mountain, on the rock / Sitting on the edge, looking at the lightning striking miles away / Looking at th108 lines, 2 comments, May 14, 2007
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pretty in pink the prom dress she wears / she goes home and dresses in sweats / comes back with thoughts of nothing to happen / its all a big came of cat and mouse / catch up drink up you dont want to lose / but yo42 lines, 3 comments, May 11, 2007
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Think of the worst / And hope for the best / Speak rumors first / Heard truth last / Always look forward / To never looking back / You brought the tension / I’ll give the slack / Winter freezes / Spring37 lines, 1 comment, May 10, 2007
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i think i thought on May 4, 2006ALKALINE TRIO!!!!!! YES!!!!! YOU NOW ROCK MY FRIEND!!!!!!!!!
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shadowofblame on March 28, 2006hey buddy i never got to tell you what awesome poems you got here. you need to post more tho cause i love your works!~! haha btw its ricky.. you should check out my latest.. I Miss You.. =) keep in touch buddy and keep up the awesome writings. (BTW THANKS FOR GETTING ME HOOKED ON THIS WEB PAGE.)
