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if any1 likes of mice and men or les meserables....say something! im 17. i have the BEST boyfriend in THE world (im really not kidding lol.) i dont really have a "style" of writing. i write from my heart and what i feel just comes out, it may not be the most cheerfull but its what i feel at that exact moment.

i like music, noooo i LOVE music its my life besides dancing i like rap, hip hop, pop, anything...give me music and ill be happpy.

im pretty, out going, and i dont take a lot of crap form people....yea...yea... i hope u like my work and coment please even if u dont like it


ATTENTION: AAKB9669: heres the poem that i rewrote because u asked me too

A sun set
Every evening
So majestic
For all to see

So beautiful
You are Gods masterpiece
You make me giggle
Every evening

True love at its best
For my love you are like a sunset
Thank God for sunsets
Pulling a luminous portrait behind it

Though it may seem as a common thing to some
For the whole world to see
And though you may seem like a common person
You are everything and more to me

To the lover it is more
To the horizon
Our love will soar
It will never be done


I speak with you
Every evening
Tell you my love is true
You make me the perfect being

So breathtaking
So beautiful
I want out hearts to be joining
I love to look into your soul

Ill never grow weary of your embrace
God creates this artwork
Because He knows we are fate
I want to hold you more

We will share our life together
I thank god for sunsets, old and new
Live it to the fullest, forever
And I thank god for you











Christ 4gives
but playin between sin an mercy's no way 2 live

  • Last seen on Nov 6 12:51 PM. Member since December 1, 2003.
  • I'm a malachite opening poet for 415 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "i love me!".
  • I am a girl from California (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
  • I have 415 comments, 2 contests, 90 poems

My Poetry

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  • [ You bleed over me, ]
    You bleed over me, / Every God damn night. / Mom doesnt want to see, / The dream the ended your life. / Face it, you both are whores, / Damn, your life was a bore. / "Yay we made a kid." / "
    20 lines, 1 comment, July 4, 2007
  • mommy and daddy
    You bleed all over me / Every God damn night / Mom doesnt want to see, / The ream that ended your life. / Face it you both are whores / Damn your life was a bore / Yay! we made a kid / Look at what we did!
    26 lines, July 4, 2007
  • his name
    Daddy was his name / Playing was his game / Using Bitches like Mary Jane / Fucking hoes, bang, bang / He couldnt handle lifes hardships / No, he couldnt handle his own shit / I hate myself because of him / I hat
    9 lines, July 4, 2007. In personal
  • love for the first time
    Theres nothing better then to see his smile
    As hes making love to me, the stream going for miles
    25 lines, 5 comments, September 17, 2005. In Erotica

Guest Book

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  • N e a r on April 19, 2006
    Hey you. Long time no talk. How are things?
  • luckhole on May 11, 2004
    hey hey just wanted to say THANK YOU for hosting a kick-ass contest and bestowing upon me the lovely silver trophy!! i had so much fun entering and reading the other entries, this contest was a laugh and a half!!
  • N e a r on April 3, 2004
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/568039
  • nokiddin08 on April 2, 2004
    yes you should qt!!!!! byyyyeee ben (thanks for being the best in the world!)

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