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MystricalShow poetry

Well hey there, I'm pretty new at this website, but so far it's been real cool. I... darn, well I can't really think of what to write. I've always admired the arts, and whole lot of other stuff in this world. Well, there are also awsome things out there in space to. I really love how much this world has to give, like the simple grandeur of the sky, the imperfection of a single leaf, the smell of flowers, of the misty forest just after it rained. Of course with all the bad things in this world... or at least what we consider "bad", it can drive you crazy and change you into a different person if you focus your thoughts on all those negative things. I by nature am somewhat of a pessimist... well I'm not too sure. It's just I occasionally have thoughts that drive me crazy, but I think we all have those negative, unwanted thoughts, so it's not just me. But usually I'm an outgoing, optimistic kind of person. I have some friends around on this site, so I'll prolly be on contact with them. I'm in love, and it feels great. However it's a very complex thing, a very... "humane" feeling as I would say. Passion, to, is what I would call a very human feeling. It really drives me. For my poem style, well I usually try to make them rhyme. But recently I've decided to focus less on rhyming and more on simply what I want to write. So yes, I'm going to see how my future poems will be. Well I hope you enjoy it, so... enjoy!

  • Last seen on May 16 12:44 PM. Member since August 2, 2005.
  • I'm a jade dragon poet for 256 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is ""Your mind is your imagination's playground."".
  • I am a 18 year old guy (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a lover.
  • Visit my homepage at dun have one... yet
  • I have 256 comments, 48 poems

My Poetry

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  • I am a poem. I express feelings.
    38 lines, March 9, 2008
  • Yeah it's one of those days, the one's where feelings don't go away.
    23 lines, March 9, 2008. In Hope
  • 15 lines, November 25, 2006. In Haiku
  • OMG Angie you got me on a hook
    br
    14 lines, November 25, 2006. In Angst

Guest Book

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  • LikexAxMoth on June 15, 2006
    Hi alan! How have you been? I havent talked to you in a while. Hope you're having a great summer n blah blah blah. love ya!!
  • LolaUnscripted on January 1, 2006
    Hey wow for being new you sure do have alot of fans lol jk I wanted to thank you personally well write to you personally rather than applaud your comment, Thank you very much I'm glad you liked the piece, truth is you asked me wether or not it happened to me, it hasnt yet but it will soon, I wrote the piece half on my feelings and half of a loved one. Seeing her up there made me shed a tear...I'm not the type to cry. Once again thank you very much I'm happy to know you enjoyed it very much.
    Lola*
  • Ellis on October 22, 2005
    Thank you, mystrical, for critiquing my poem
    WHAT TV SHOULD BE.
    If love flows between you and Angie, you are
    more fortunate than so many. Be thankful and
    appreciatve and kind and thoughtful and gentle!
  • -simply me- on August 8, 2005
    ALAN!!!!
    Thats awesome. You are finally on here. I had my suspicions that it was you. YAY. Ok I am fine. LOL, I would say some other things, but I think Anghela would kill me, but yeah. Ok I'll talk to you later. And I am gonna read your stuff.
    ~Coral~

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