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MysinfulAmadeo• Show poetry

I'm a college junior, who loves reading, writing, my puppies, my friends, traveling, asian food, baking, hiking, New Orleans, theatre, music, and recently took up drawing and photography.

My editorial skills are horribly lacking, so I welcome any and all grammar nazis to rip my work apart, because my poor poems need it.

Flames do not upset me. I laugh at them. Threatening to sic your vampire boyfriend on me (yes, it's happened before le sigh) will not upset me. I will not delete rude comments. Rather, I shall leave them out so that the whole virtual world may see your immaturity and stupidity...and mock you for it.

Toodles!


                                                 ~~Fleeting Humors~~

Song:

'Pretty When You Cry' by VAST

you're made of my rib or baby
you're made of my sin
and i can't tell where your lust ends
and where your love begins

i didn't want to hurt you baby
i didn't want to hurt you
i didn't want to hurt you
but you're pretty when you cry

The moon gives me permission
and i enter through her eyes
she's losing her virginity
and all her will to compromise

i didn't want to hurt you baby
i didn't want to hurt you
i didn't want to hurt you
but you're pretty when you cry

i didn't want to fuck you baby
i didn't want to fuck you
i didn't want to fuck you
but you're pretty when you're mine

i didn't really love you baby
i didn't really love you
i didn't really love you
but i'm pretty when i lie

if you knew how much i love you
you would run away
but when i treat you bad
it always makes you want to stay

                           
Book(s):
Memoires of A Geisha
The Da Vinci Code by Dan Brown

Poem(s):
The Female of the Species by Rudyard Kipling

Movie(s):
Phantom of the Opera by ALW

Band(s):
The Irish Rovers



My Poetry

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  • Unrequited Desire, Thy name is Cuisinart
    I want to pour all I have into you.
    Watch those soft, rose-bud lips drink of me.
    33 lines, 7 comments, May 5, 2006. In Love, Humor, Angst
  • Because
    Because I beleive no government, no corporation, no church, should have complete control over the people
    50 lines, 3 comments, May 5, 2006. In Society
  • Lowest
    I know what it feels like to be that lonely
    I know what it's like to be that afraid of life
    77 lines, 10 comments, May 5, 2006. In Personal, Dark, Angst
  • Downtrodden
    You won't even acknowledge me sitting here,
    Alone and shivering and wishing I could follow you
    26 lines, May 4, 2006. In Sad

My Stories

1 - 3 of 5   Show all at storywrite

Guest Book

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  • -Darkest Desire- on May 5, 2006
    i rather like you lol. reading your page, you seem like a pretty nice person and it'd be nice to get to know you better, being i already love all your work
    Keep it up
    later
    ~Alea

    ps- really? a vampyre boyfriend...wow
  • on February 28, 2005
    hello! I WOULD read your pages, but I can't see the dark blue on black, no matter how bright I turn my monitor... dang! I was hoping to read your works, too!
  • chibi-kaiyaska on February 27, 2005
    HIIII! Amadeo! I still say the Marius is the coolest of the guy vampyres with Tarquinn in second. I'm gonna read all of your poems now

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