Mybrokenmind• Show poetry

I've never shared my poetry with the world. This should be interesting.

Why don't we end this lie

I can't pretend this time

I need a friend to find

My broken mind before it falls to pieces

Everytime

You try to leave me blind

You'll never close my eyes

You'll never close my eyes and watch me die

- Billy Talent

"Our tragedies are words that never escaped our lips, and electricity that never left our fingertips..."

"Baby there's a storm outside, but it don't have a thing on the lightning in your eyes..."

I'll put more up later.

Last seen on Sep 7 2:50 AM 2007. Member since February 27, 2007.
I'm a topaz horse poet for 17 comments.
I am a 19 year old guy from Oklahoma (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm a full-time musician and a part-time student.
I have 17 comments, 10 poems

My Poetry

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Blue Jeans

You can’t take me everywhere, though you wish you could,
Because I’m so rough around the edges

13 lines, 1 comment, March 30, 2007
The Bar

A dim light pierces through the darkness to light the stage on which he sat.
Smoke hangs in the air, playing games with the light, d

22 lines, 2 comments, March 15, 2007. In Love
Warning: Handle With Care

53 lines, 3 comments, February 28, 2007
Hearts

22 lines, 6 comments, February 28, 2007

Guest Book

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poetrycall on July 15, 2007

:] You're sweet.
Ragan on March 6, 2007

Hey, I'm ckecking you out right now, but I don't have time to do much. I'll be back after awhile and read your work. I added you as a favorite so I'll talk to you if I see you.
poetrycall on February 28, 2007

Yeah, I'm kind of...North-ish East.
It sucks they don't visit you.
I'm really hoping I'm still going...
I kind of told the ticket holder to fuck off.
Hmm...oops...we'll see. Haha.

Btw I think it's awesome you're a guy that writes poetry. I know that sounds SO stereotypical...like girls thinking it's cute and all...I hope that that's not why you write, haha. I just thought I'd let you know that that's really cool. :]
poetrycall on February 28, 2007

You randomly found me? :]
That's really cool.
& I Billy Talent rocks my socks;
I'm seeing them soon, I hope.

Thanks for the comments.
They were nice.<3