Muffins.13

hmmmm, i guess i want to ask for advice on my poetry. any thing. please and thank you

i live in colorado. very pretty. and i am learning to play guitar. lol im working on lyrics. and putting music to it. so any kind of harsh comment of how bad i really am WILL help. wether you like it or not. (he he)

Last seen on Sep 21 7:01 PM. Member since February 2, 2008.
I'm a emerald dog poet for 8 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "it's YOUR life, rise up and live it".
I am a 14 year old girl from Colorado (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm in school (duh).
I have 8 comments, 41 poems

My Poetry

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nameless

hidden underneath the sun
sparkling under the moon

48 lines, September 21
Red

red
fiery, blazing charcoal.

13 lines, April 30
[ the borken sidewalk ]

the borken sidewalk
the fresh rain leaves

5 lines, April 30
forever alone.

in the night, darkness
as you sit fearful...alone

16 lines, April 30

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Run Rhen Run : YO GABBA GABBA!!! on June 9, 2008

hello a peson i like to call 'SKYE OF THE MAGNIFICENT TACONESS' it is i, your long lost bretheren, rhen and kayla, i being kayla, and her being rhen. JUST KIDDING. this is rie, and the thing that is currently wearing my skirt that is sitting beside me just so happens to be a girl i like to call KILALA![spelt as kirara but pronounced kilala acording to which happens to be her name which has an 'l' and not an 'r'] anyways, so i just wanted to say that you will probably be sitting at the same damn computer i am at right now when you begin to read this and you are going to be like, "RHEENNNN??? what is the meaning of this gay @$$ message?" and i shall say, "it is for the sisterly love, my dear" so we might not as well have that conversation at all because i already said what is needed to be said. kilala is currently about to wet her panties in my skirt for she thinks this is very entertaing. well, i just wanted to express my indept joy that you, my sister, and i, your sister, shall be reunited in utter chaos once more!!!! BWA HA HA HA HA!

love you very annoying but crazily fun and embarrasing to be around sister,
rhen
[with kayla in her skirt right next to her laughing at me still... ]