So, here is my poetry. It is what it is, but I'd love some constructive comments so I can improve. Most of this is just my feelings and thoughts purged on paper, or screen whatever. Anyway, Enjoy.
- Last seen on Nov 7 1:02 AM. Member since August 6, 2003.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 171 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "I got to keep on movin'.".
- I am a 21 year old girl (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Photography Student .
- I have 171 comments, 2 contests, 73 poems, 6 stories
My Poetry
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I tell everyone I'm moving for the job opportunities, but really I'm moving so I have the chance just to touch him once, even if he'll never be mine.0 lines, 5 comments, February 14, 2008
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I wore my new green bathing suit, And a diving mask, two sizes too big.
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With a glorious rush of recognition
I slide into your arms.
My Stories
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5058 lines, 9 comments, February 2, 2006. In <200 lines, Erotica
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I learned a lot from Anna, and I will remember hundreds of little things about her until the day I die: The way her hair fell, the way she smiled when she knew something you ha733 lines, 3 comments, March 17, 2004. In <200 lines, Other
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We must have flown right past that fated spot not four hours earlier. Driven right past that space in the road on our way to the river. That day will always stick with me, like552 lines, September 25, 2003. In <200 lines, Other
Guest Book
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Lighthouse Guard on October 25, 2006At your feet i sacrify my heart
As a slave i wish to commit
To the temple of my mistressfialle
Worshiping her with no regret -
Scarlet Ambrosia on December 13, 2004I enjoyed reading some of your poems.... but for got t o comment though.... ewell hope u drop by my place grl !
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Akiyhrah on October 4, 2004Hey hun!! Just came by to give you a hug and a kiss! ^__^
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CurvyDiva18 on September 18, 2003I like your poems didn't read them all but I like what I read.
Thank you for your comment on my poem Thinking of you.
