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Miss-mexico

Hi Everyone,

My name is Kim
I am Fourteen
And I like to write poetry.

So if you could please comment my poems and tell me what i can do to make them any better.

Thanks.

  • Last seen on Feb 7 1:10 AM. Member since November 21, 2008.
  • I am a 14 year old girl (United States)
  • I have 4 poems

My Poetry

1 - 4 of 4
  • This is about a really famous serial killer. I have no idea ho wi came up witht he idea though.
    20 lines, 1 comment, November 21, 2008. In Pychopathic, Murder, Dark
  • Through the frost
    A magical flutter
    13 lines, 1 comment, November 21, 2008. In Nature
  • A shade of blue covers my eyes,
    A sea of fans lure behind
    12 lines, November 21, 2008. In Sport
  • Plumeting
    Deeper, Deeper, Deeper
    7 lines, November 21, 2008. In Nature

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