Hey, name's Ryan, just here to share some song lyrics, and maybe get some feedback (Y) Will try to return ALL comments
add msn: picman64@hotmail.com, even if u dont know me, would love to meet ya x]
Probably one of the best poems on society ever writtenn:
Omega
What a skeletal wreck of man this is;
Translucent flesh and feeble bones,
The kind of temple where the whores and villians try to tempt the holistic tomes
Running rampant with free thought to free form, in the free and clear
And the matters at hand are shelled out like lint at a laundromat,
To sift and focus on the bigger, better, now.
We all have a little sin than needs venting,
Virtues for the rending,
Laws and systems and stems a rift from branches of office,
Do you know what your post entails?
Do you serve a purpose,
Or purposely serve?
Wind down inside of your atavistic allure;
The value of a summer spent, and a winter earned.
For the rest of us there is always Sunday.
The day of the week that reaks of rest,
But all we do is catch our breath,
So we can wade naked into the bloody pool,
And place our hand on the big black book;
To watch the knives zig-zag between our aching fingers.
A vacation is a count-down.
'T' minus your life and counting.
Time to drag your tongue across the sugar-cube,
And hope you get a taste.
What the F*CK is all this for?! (What the hell's goin' on?!)
SHUT UP!!
I could go on and on, but, lets move on shall we?
Say, you're me and I'm you,
And they all watch the things we do,
And like a smack of spite, they threw me down the stairs -
Haven't felt like this in years;
The great magnet of malicious magnanamous refuse.
Let me go, and,
Plunge me into the dead spot again.
That's where you go when there's no-one else around;
It's just you and there was never anyone to begin with, now was there?
Sanctomonious pretentious dasterdly b*stards,
With their thumb on the pulse - and a finger on the trigger.
Classified my ass, that's a F*CKING secret and you know it!
Government is another way to say,
Better.
Than.
You.
It's like ice but no pick,
A murder charge that won't stick,
It's like a whole other world
Where you can smell the food,
But you can't touch the silverware.
Hmm, what luck.
Fascism you can vote for.
Isn't that sweet...
We're all gonna die some day,
'Cause thats the American way,
And I've drunk too much
And said too little,
When your gaffer taped in the middle;
Say a prayer, save face,
get yourself together and (see what's happening!)
SHUT UP! (FUCK YOU!)
FUCK YOU!
I'm sorry, I could go on and on but,
It's time to move on so...
Remember, you're a wreck; an accident
Forget the freak, you're just nature.
Keep the gun oiled and the temple clean,
Shit, snort and blaspheme,
Let the heads cool and the engine run,
Because in the end,
Everything we do,
Is just everything we've done.
- Corey Taylor of Slipknot, Stone Sour
If u want to hear this poem read out loud by corey taylor, follow this link (not my video) http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=7085764
Another great one by Corey Taylor:
The Frozen
The girls on the streets all look sad in this gold encrusted little town,
Why is that?
Isn't this the town of dreams?
Yeah... but it comes with a price.
It's a town that never does anything and yet takes all the credit.
A place that promises so much,
But never has a thing to say,
Or a care in the world.
There is no memory here,
No dream for itself but the dreams of others
And all over the world you talk of a place you've only seen in re-runs,
Immortalized for it's vice, and deified for it's carnage.
There's money in the air there, all you have to do is reach up and grab it.
In basements, garages, parking lots, empty lots,
Schoolyards, town cars, backrooms and more.
Diamonds are fashioned from expectations and fortified on a steady diet,
Of simple lives and red carpets;
The ejaculating Zeitgeist in night vision
Culture is a punch line and emotion is blood in the water,
The sharks here play games you can't fathom,
But you flock here anyway.
On college money and credit cards,
Spend a week bull shitting yourself that it was all true, all of it,
Just to watch in horror as it all falls to pieces under the gravity of reality.
The starry eyes fade as it dawns on you,
Nothing is guaranteed.
You are a part of the great divide;
The Chosen or The Frozen.
Now your mouth's away without a net,
Your college money's a collage of debt,
And your credit cards are all snapped in f*cking half.
Time to wander a landscape bereft of mercy,
This is now the back lot of your failed movie.
A waking dream re-written without your permission,
The real luster, the soft focus,
The...soap opera vision is just the hindsight of a world who's been lied to,
Of sad surfs and untouchable lords.
You took a chance didn't you?
But chance didn't have a par for you this time around; maybe next life.
And you can't even walk home.
The girls on the streets all look sad in this cardboard cut-out little town.
Hm, no wonder, that's the only thing here that's real.
The gold is for fools, and paradise is lost,
But the hungry have never bothered with the cost.
Day by day they fall away like rose pedals,
Like, ink, that won't dry or fade.
It just runs wild down cracks and crevices, grooves and folds,
So I hope someone saves you before you get cold,
I really do.
Because the girls are all sad in this little black book,
If you don't believe me, take a closer look...if you can
-Corey Taylor of Slipknot, Stone Sour
If you wanna hear this poem read out loud by corey taylor, follow the link (not taking credit for the vid) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tCn7ROT-qzU
Musicc:
Aerosmith
*Alexisonfire*
Alice in Chains
*All That Remains*
As I Lay Dying
Atreyu
August Burns Red
*Avenged Sevenfold*
Before Their Eyes
Billy Talent
Black Label Society
Bloodsimple
*Breaking Benjamin*
*Bullet For My Valentine*
Children of Bodom
Cinderella
Dark New Day
Daughtry
Def Leopard
Demon Hunter
*Destroy The Runner*
Disturbed
Dream Theater
Drowning Pool
Evanescence
Godsmack
Guns 'N' Roses
H.I.M.
*Haste The Day*
In Fear and Faith
*In Flames*
*Inhale/Exhale*
Iron Maiden
*Killswitch Engage*
*Lamb of God*
Machine Head
Mudvayne
*Metallica*
Nickelback
Norma Jean
Oceana
*Of Machines*
*Pantera*
Papa Roach
*Protest The Hero*
Shadows Fall
Silverstein
*Slipknot*
*Soilwork*
Static-X
Still Remains
*Stone Sour*
Symphony-X
System of a Down
The Devil Wears Prada
*Threat Signal*
Three Days Grace
*Trivium*
Underoath
Unearth
*Van Halen*
Walls of Jericho
+ much more
Favourite Songs
11th Hour - Lamb of God
A Call To The Faithful - Inhale/Exhale
*A New Beginning - Threat Signal*
*A Trigger Full of Promises - Walls of Jericho*
Abnegation - In Flames
Accidents - Alexisonfire
Aerials - System of a Down
Afterlife - Avenged Sevenfold
Alias - In Flames
*All These Things I Hate - Bullet For My Valentine*
An Adault Tree - Haste The Day
*Another Hero Lost - Shadows Fall*
Are You Dead Yet? - Children of Bodom
As I Am - Dream Theater
As I Destruct - Threat Signal
As We Speak - Soilwork
Awake - Godsmack
Blackened - Metallica
Blindfolds Aside - Protest The Hero
*Bloodmeat - Protest The Hero*
*Bother - Stone Sour*
Cemetery Gates - Pantera
**Chorus of Angels - Haste The Day**
Come Clarity - In Flames
*Comin' Home - City And Colour*
Constant Motion - Dream Theater
Cries In Vain - Bullet For My Valentine
*Critical Acclaim - Avenged Sevenfold*
Curses - Bullet For My Valentine
Delight And Angers - In Flames
Desperate Times - Killswitch Engage
Disconnected - In Flames
Distance - Soilwork
*Distortion Sleep - Soilwork*
Domination - Symphony-X
Don't Tread On Me - Metallica
Down From The Sky - Trivium
Drowned and Torn Asunder - Trivium
Drag The Waters - Pantera
Driven - Sevendust
*Evil In A Closet - In Flames*
Eye of The Storm - Killswitch Engage
*Freeze Dry Seal - Stone Sour*
Hand of Blood - Bullet For My Valentine
*Haunting - Haste The Day*
Hit The Floor - Bullet For My Valentine
Hit The Floor - Linkin Park
*Hollow - Pantera*
Holy Diver - Killswitch Engage
Hourglass - Lamb of God
*I Never Wanted - As I Lay Dying*
**I Won't See You Tonight Pt 1. - Avenged Sevenfold**
I Won't See You Tonight Pt 2. - Avenged Sevenfold
I'm The Highway - In Flames
In Memory - Haste The Day
In Your Words - Lamb of God
Into The Mouth of Hell We March - Trivium
Isabella's - Destroy The Runner
Laid To Rest - Lamb of God
**Louder Than Thunder - The Devil Wears Prada**
Loyalty - American Head Charge
*Madman - Haste The Day*
*March To The Shore - In Flames*
My Curse - Killswitch Engage
My Fork In The Road - Atreyu
*My Sweet Shadow - In Flames*
Nautical - Protest The Hero
Nerve - Soilwork
Out To Get You - Bloodsimple
Pieces - Dark New Day
*Pull Harder On The Strings of Your Martyr - Trivium*
Redemption - Shadows Fall
Redneck - Lamb of God
Regret Not - All That Remains
*Reject Yourself - Killswitch Engage*
Revolution Is My Name - Pantera
*Room 409 - Bullet For My Valentine*
*Rose of Sharyn - Killswitch Engage*
*Resolve - Haste The Day*
Say Goodnight - Bullet For My Valentine
*Scream - Slipknot*
*Seize The Day - Avenged Sevenfold*
Set The World On Fire - Symphony-X
Six - All That Remains
*Sleepless Again - In Flames*
**Snuff - Slipknot**
Sober And Irrelevant - In Flames
*Starting Over - Killswitch Engage*
*Stitches - Haste The Day*
Suffer - Stone Sour
*Tears Don't Fall - Bullet For My Valentine*
*The Accountable - Oceana*
**The Day I Let Go - Stone Sour**
The End - Bullet For My Valentine
The End of Heartache - Killswitch Engage
*The Family Disease - Oceana*
*The Judas Kiss - Metallica*
*The Minor Prophets - Haste The Day*
The Mirror's Truth - In Flames
*The Nameless - Slipknot*
The Only - Static-X
*The Poison - Bullet For My Valentine*
These Colours Don't Run - Protest The Hero
These Walls - Dream Theater
This Calling - All That Remains
This Could Be Anywhere In The World - Alexisonfire
This Fire - Killswitch Engage
*This Is Absolution - Killswitch Engage*
*Three Nil - Slipknot*
*Throes of Perdition - Trivium*
*Through Glass - Stone Sour*
Through Struggle - As I Lay Dying
*To A Friend - Alexisonfire*
Torn Between Scylla And Charibdis - Trivium
*Trust - Megadeth*
Unholy Confessions - Avenged Sevenfold
**Vermilion/Vermilion Part 2. - Slipknot**
*Waking The Demon - Bullet For My Valentine*
*Wasted Sacrifice - Killswitch Engage*
We Stand - All That Remains
*When Darkness Falls - Killswitch Engage*
Wherever I May Roam - Metallica
*Whispers - All That Remains*
Wicked Game - Stone Sour
Wretch - Protest The Hero
*Zzyzx Rd. - Stone Sour*
+ much more
add msn: picman64@hotmail.com, even if u dont know me, would love to meet ya x]
Probably one of the best poems on society ever writtenn:
Omega
What a skeletal wreck of man this is;
Translucent flesh and feeble bones,
The kind of temple where the whores and villians try to tempt the holistic tomes
Running rampant with free thought to free form, in the free and clear
And the matters at hand are shelled out like lint at a laundromat,
To sift and focus on the bigger, better, now.
We all have a little sin than needs venting,
Virtues for the rending,
Laws and systems and stems a rift from branches of office,
Do you know what your post entails?
Do you serve a purpose,
Or purposely serve?
Wind down inside of your atavistic allure;
The value of a summer spent, and a winter earned.
For the rest of us there is always Sunday.
The day of the week that reaks of rest,
But all we do is catch our breath,
So we can wade naked into the bloody pool,
And place our hand on the big black book;
To watch the knives zig-zag between our aching fingers.
A vacation is a count-down.
'T' minus your life and counting.
Time to drag your tongue across the sugar-cube,
And hope you get a taste.
What the F*CK is all this for?! (What the hell's goin' on?!)
SHUT UP!!
I could go on and on, but, lets move on shall we?
Say, you're me and I'm you,
And they all watch the things we do,
And like a smack of spite, they threw me down the stairs -
Haven't felt like this in years;
The great magnet of malicious magnanamous refuse.
Let me go, and,
Plunge me into the dead spot again.
That's where you go when there's no-one else around;
It's just you and there was never anyone to begin with, now was there?
Sanctomonious pretentious dasterdly b*stards,
With their thumb on the pulse - and a finger on the trigger.
Classified my ass, that's a F*CKING secret and you know it!
Government is another way to say,
Better.
Than.
You.
It's like ice but no pick,
A murder charge that won't stick,
It's like a whole other world
Where you can smell the food,
But you can't touch the silverware.
Hmm, what luck.
Fascism you can vote for.
Isn't that sweet...
We're all gonna die some day,
'Cause thats the American way,
And I've drunk too much
And said too little,
When your gaffer taped in the middle;
Say a prayer, save face,
get yourself together and (see what's happening!)
SHUT UP! (FUCK YOU!)
FUCK YOU!
I'm sorry, I could go on and on but,
It's time to move on so...
Remember, you're a wreck; an accident
Forget the freak, you're just nature.
Keep the gun oiled and the temple clean,
Shit, snort and blaspheme,
Let the heads cool and the engine run,
Because in the end,
Everything we do,
Is just everything we've done.
- Corey Taylor of Slipknot, Stone Sour
If u want to hear this poem read out loud by corey taylor, follow this link (not my video) http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=7085764
Another great one by Corey Taylor:
The Frozen
The girls on the streets all look sad in this gold encrusted little town,
Why is that?
Isn't this the town of dreams?
Yeah... but it comes with a price.
It's a town that never does anything and yet takes all the credit.
A place that promises so much,
But never has a thing to say,
Or a care in the world.
There is no memory here,
No dream for itself but the dreams of others
And all over the world you talk of a place you've only seen in re-runs,
Immortalized for it's vice, and deified for it's carnage.
There's money in the air there, all you have to do is reach up and grab it.
In basements, garages, parking lots, empty lots,
Schoolyards, town cars, backrooms and more.
Diamonds are fashioned from expectations and fortified on a steady diet,
Of simple lives and red carpets;
The ejaculating Zeitgeist in night vision
Culture is a punch line and emotion is blood in the water,
The sharks here play games you can't fathom,
But you flock here anyway.
On college money and credit cards,
Spend a week bull shitting yourself that it was all true, all of it,
Just to watch in horror as it all falls to pieces under the gravity of reality.
The starry eyes fade as it dawns on you,
Nothing is guaranteed.
You are a part of the great divide;
The Chosen or The Frozen.
Now your mouth's away without a net,
Your college money's a collage of debt,
And your credit cards are all snapped in f*cking half.
Time to wander a landscape bereft of mercy,
This is now the back lot of your failed movie.
A waking dream re-written without your permission,
The real luster, the soft focus,
The...soap opera vision is just the hindsight of a world who's been lied to,
Of sad surfs and untouchable lords.
You took a chance didn't you?
But chance didn't have a par for you this time around; maybe next life.
And you can't even walk home.
The girls on the streets all look sad in this cardboard cut-out little town.
Hm, no wonder, that's the only thing here that's real.
The gold is for fools, and paradise is lost,
But the hungry have never bothered with the cost.
Day by day they fall away like rose pedals,
Like, ink, that won't dry or fade.
It just runs wild down cracks and crevices, grooves and folds,
So I hope someone saves you before you get cold,
I really do.
Because the girls are all sad in this little black book,
If you don't believe me, take a closer look...if you can
-Corey Taylor of Slipknot, Stone Sour
If you wanna hear this poem read out loud by corey taylor, follow the link (not taking credit for the vid) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tCn7ROT-qzU
Musicc:
Aerosmith
*Alexisonfire*
Alice in Chains
*All That Remains*
As I Lay Dying
Atreyu
August Burns Red
*Avenged Sevenfold*
Before Their Eyes
Billy Talent
Black Label Society
Bloodsimple
*Breaking Benjamin*
*Bullet For My Valentine*
Children of Bodom
Cinderella
Dark New Day
Daughtry
Def Leopard
Demon Hunter
*Destroy The Runner*
Disturbed
Dream Theater
Drowning Pool
Evanescence
Godsmack
Guns 'N' Roses
H.I.M.
*Haste The Day*
In Fear and Faith
*In Flames*
*Inhale/Exhale*
Iron Maiden
*Killswitch Engage*
*Lamb of God*
Machine Head
Mudvayne
*Metallica*
Nickelback
Norma Jean
Oceana
*Of Machines*
*Pantera*
Papa Roach
*Protest The Hero*
Shadows Fall
Silverstein
*Slipknot*
*Soilwork*
Static-X
Still Remains
*Stone Sour*
Symphony-X
System of a Down
The Devil Wears Prada
*Threat Signal*
Three Days Grace
*Trivium*
Underoath
Unearth
*Van Halen*
Walls of Jericho
+ much more
Favourite Songs
11th Hour - Lamb of God
A Call To The Faithful - Inhale/Exhale
*A New Beginning - Threat Signal*
*A Trigger Full of Promises - Walls of Jericho*
Abnegation - In Flames
Accidents - Alexisonfire
Aerials - System of a Down
Afterlife - Avenged Sevenfold
Alias - In Flames
*All These Things I Hate - Bullet For My Valentine*
An Adault Tree - Haste The Day
*Another Hero Lost - Shadows Fall*
Are You Dead Yet? - Children of Bodom
As I Am - Dream Theater
As I Destruct - Threat Signal
As We Speak - Soilwork
Awake - Godsmack
Blackened - Metallica
Blindfolds Aside - Protest The Hero
*Bloodmeat - Protest The Hero*
*Bother - Stone Sour*
Cemetery Gates - Pantera
**Chorus of Angels - Haste The Day**
Come Clarity - In Flames
*Comin' Home - City And Colour*
Constant Motion - Dream Theater
Cries In Vain - Bullet For My Valentine
*Critical Acclaim - Avenged Sevenfold*
Curses - Bullet For My Valentine
Delight And Angers - In Flames
Desperate Times - Killswitch Engage
Disconnected - In Flames
Distance - Soilwork
*Distortion Sleep - Soilwork*
Domination - Symphony-X
Don't Tread On Me - Metallica
Down From The Sky - Trivium
Drowned and Torn Asunder - Trivium
Drag The Waters - Pantera
Driven - Sevendust
*Evil In A Closet - In Flames*
Eye of The Storm - Killswitch Engage
*Freeze Dry Seal - Stone Sour*
Hand of Blood - Bullet For My Valentine
*Haunting - Haste The Day*
Hit The Floor - Bullet For My Valentine
Hit The Floor - Linkin Park
*Hollow - Pantera*
Holy Diver - Killswitch Engage
Hourglass - Lamb of God
*I Never Wanted - As I Lay Dying*
**I Won't See You Tonight Pt 1. - Avenged Sevenfold**
I Won't See You Tonight Pt 2. - Avenged Sevenfold
I'm The Highway - In Flames
In Memory - Haste The Day
In Your Words - Lamb of God
Into The Mouth of Hell We March - Trivium
Isabella's - Destroy The Runner
Laid To Rest - Lamb of God
**Louder Than Thunder - The Devil Wears Prada**
Loyalty - American Head Charge
*Madman - Haste The Day*
*March To The Shore - In Flames*
My Curse - Killswitch Engage
My Fork In The Road - Atreyu
*My Sweet Shadow - In Flames*
Nautical - Protest The Hero
Nerve - Soilwork
Out To Get You - Bloodsimple
Pieces - Dark New Day
*Pull Harder On The Strings of Your Martyr - Trivium*
Redemption - Shadows Fall
Redneck - Lamb of God
Regret Not - All That Remains
*Reject Yourself - Killswitch Engage*
Revolution Is My Name - Pantera
*Room 409 - Bullet For My Valentine*
*Rose of Sharyn - Killswitch Engage*
*Resolve - Haste The Day*
Say Goodnight - Bullet For My Valentine
*Scream - Slipknot*
*Seize The Day - Avenged Sevenfold*
Set The World On Fire - Symphony-X
Six - All That Remains
*Sleepless Again - In Flames*
**Snuff - Slipknot**
Sober And Irrelevant - In Flames
*Starting Over - Killswitch Engage*
*Stitches - Haste The Day*
Suffer - Stone Sour
*Tears Don't Fall - Bullet For My Valentine*
*The Accountable - Oceana*
**The Day I Let Go - Stone Sour**
The End - Bullet For My Valentine
The End of Heartache - Killswitch Engage
*The Family Disease - Oceana*
*The Judas Kiss - Metallica*
*The Minor Prophets - Haste The Day*
The Mirror's Truth - In Flames
*The Nameless - Slipknot*
The Only - Static-X
*The Poison - Bullet For My Valentine*
These Colours Don't Run - Protest The Hero
These Walls - Dream Theater
This Calling - All That Remains
This Could Be Anywhere In The World - Alexisonfire
This Fire - Killswitch Engage
*This Is Absolution - Killswitch Engage*
*Three Nil - Slipknot*
*Throes of Perdition - Trivium*
*Through Glass - Stone Sour*
Through Struggle - As I Lay Dying
*To A Friend - Alexisonfire*
Torn Between Scylla And Charibdis - Trivium
*Trust - Megadeth*
Unholy Confessions - Avenged Sevenfold
**Vermilion/Vermilion Part 2. - Slipknot**
*Waking The Demon - Bullet For My Valentine*
*Wasted Sacrifice - Killswitch Engage*
We Stand - All That Remains
*When Darkness Falls - Killswitch Engage*
Wherever I May Roam - Metallica
*Whispers - All That Remains*
Wicked Game - Stone Sour
Wretch - Protest The Hero
*Zzyzx Rd. - Stone Sour*
+ much more
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- I have 347 comments, 25 poems
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Kinda dark, my first actual poem not counting my song lyrics, hope it works for everybody (Y)
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About betrayal and revenge, more of a malicious feel compared to my usual stuff, commentt
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The Hardest Goodbye on November 6I fucking love your page.
The music especially.
Metal = Love <3
I am in love with Avenged Sevenfold.
I am also in love with the song Vermillion Pt.2 by slipknot, amazing song. & so is Stupify by Disturbed =)
Sorry to ramble on xD -
WitchyCatWoman on October 20Thanks for reading my poem, " Your Horse, My Saddle". Looking forward to reading one of your poems.
Hugs,
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glamour glitch. on October 8Just dropping by to thank you for the comment on a poem of mine.
You seem pretty rad. I love your page. ^.^
Message me anytime if you want. I don't bite...often. [=
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BurningYouAlive on September 20ahhh I don't remember the last time I sat at my computer for sooo long reading one person's writings =P
Lol.
