Melons

• Last seen on Nov 15 11:15 AM. Member since March 19, 2004.
• I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 378 comments.
• I am a 43 year old girl (Great Britain)
• Visit my homepage at www.melswebs.com
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• I have 378 comments, 25 poems, 1 story

My Poetry

• Latent emotions

  11 lines, 7 comments, February 6, 2007. In Adult
• Satin and Silk - Lustful Fantasies (Lesbian Erotica Poem).

  and black against my satin skin,
  now curled in half-knots and twists.

  176 lines, 46 comments, June 19, 2006. In Erotica
• So In Love With You (Song)

  if I could take your hand I'd lead you through our life together
  line the path with roses, be with you forever

  71 lines, 2 comments, March 11, 2006. In Love
• Buttercup Sway (Haiku 4, 6, 5)

  buttercups sway
  within shuffled green fields,

  3 lines, 10 comments, January 23, 2006. In Haiku, Nature

My Stories

• Cruising for Love

  6098 lines, 14 comments, March 28, 2004. In 200-1500 lines, Erotica

Guest Book

• Sunshinegf on March 11, 2006

  you are oozing with lots
  of talent in your poetry
  keep writing into the future
  because i enjoyed checking them out
• melons on March 11, 2006

  Hi Dan
  
  Mairi Bheag is a member of my website and an excellent literary writer. Thanks for taking the time to read some of my work, I must admit I do have your audio 'Blink' and isten to it often, having read your profile some time ago. I don't come to this site often, lack of time mainly, though I poke my nose through the screen to see what's going on. I have done some of my own audios too, without the music, I think the reading with the music in Blink works fantastically and you are indeed very talented. I write mainly erotica poetry, my own style though, not your normal run of the mill (I hope *chuckling). I have often thought I will try some 'rap-style' poetry, I'm game to try anything *smiling and have even written several songs with simple melodies.
  
  Did you compose the music for blink yourself? I find it incredibly effective yet unobtrusively simple and it adds a really good dimension to your words, the emotion in your voice and the thoughts you express.
  
  Thanks for taking the time to come and comment in my guestbook here
  
  hugs,
  
  Melx
• DanASBO on March 4, 2006

  Hey there.
  You were recommended to me by Mairi bheag. I've read a few of your pieces and have to say I'm impressed, I don't normally critique but I'll comment on a few of these when I get the time.
  
  Dan.
• Cacho on January 23, 2006

  You have a talent to write from the heart. That's not something to downplay. (Not to mention your talent to communicate from you heart to that of the reader) You have the potential to be very successful in the field of writing. Pursue it. Much luck and much love.
  -stranger

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