I am getting back into writing after a 20 year absence. I would appreciate feedback and suggestions on how to improve my writing. I only have 4 poems in electronic format at this point as I usually write longhand, edit, then type onto my laptop, but I am working on transcribing 20 yrs worth of poetry-what makes my cut anyway-onto word, then onto this site. Thanks in advance for any input!
Shari
Writer, illustrator, amateur photographer (not all photographs here are mine, some are from friends), stay at home hockey mom.
Shari
Writer, illustrator, amateur photographer (not all photographs here are mine, some are from friends), stay at home hockey mom.
- Last seen on Nov 16 9:14 PM. Member since September 24.
- I'm a topaz horse poet for 17 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "nervous".
- I am a 43 year old woman from New York (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm A Services Coordinator for people with developmental disabilities.
- I support the site as a silver member
- I am in the groups A Critical Circle, Poetic adventures
- I have 17 comments, 9 poems
My Poetry
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The eyes most often in my dreams I see
Are gentle, kind, and shining smile at me19 lines, 2 comments, November 1
